my poem got selected in the (poetry.com) so i juss wanted to share it wid u guyz .. juss tell me how u feel about it .. plz do write me guyz .. i’ll be waiting for ur reply
Deep Inside
The eyes use to stare has ended,
Fought with the hard times,
Hearts finally thrown out,
Walking by the moonless streets,
Rambling, time is not far away,
Feeling butterflies in my stomach,
Bowing towards God,
Asking for forgiveness,
Feeling all the pain as I touch the mud,
Bodies deep inside suffering,
Dryness gives me heartache,
Parents holding tight,
Finally will free me,
God please, if death is my answer
Hold my love ones,
Braveness has ended deep inside,
Feeling powerless,
Walking towards unwanted places,
I know my time has ended.
khubsurat :)
Re: I know my time has ended.
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Originally posted by DiYa: *
my poem got selected in the (poetry.com) so i juss wanted to share it wid u guyz .. juss tell me how u feel about it .. plz do write me guyz .. i'll be waiting for ur reply
Deep Inside
The eyes use to stare has ended,
Fought with the hard times,
Hearts finally thrown out,
Walking by the moonless streets,
Rambling, time is not far away,
Feeling butterflies in my stomach,
Bowing towards God,
Asking for forgiveness,
Feeling all the pain as I touch the mud,
Bodies deep inside suffering,
Dryness gives me heartache,
Parents holding tight,
Finally will free me,
God please, if death is my answer
Hold my love ones,
Braveness has ended deep inside,
Feeling powerless,
Walking towards unwanted places,
I know my time has ended.
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Damn you wrote that?!?!
Re: Re: I know my time has ended.
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*Originally posted by RoCKiSTaN: *
Damn you wrote that?!?!
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THanx
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
khubsurat :)
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no I Typed:-|
Very Good Diya! :roman:
I suggest that you add this in my thread " Ramzan ek Shikwa" for archiving. Put your name right under the Poem.
Please feel free to ‘Add’ more of your own work in there. Thanks
aww so nice 
Impressing :k:
Re: Re: Re: I know my time has ended.
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Originally posted by DiYa: *
THanx no I Typed:-|
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haha i think u screwed up in the response. I dig english poetry a lot...bring it on.
:k:
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ok will some new one on
Thanks
THANX
sosweet of U:kiss:
lovely
Very nice Diya.