i havent thought of a title yet :S

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Mano85 June 5, 2005, 12:15pm 1

hum bhi kisi kay rehtay sahaaray hotay
kay kaash gardish main qismat kay sitaray hotay

jaanay kis o’r lay jaayegi yeh zindagi ki nehar
gar sumandar jo hota tou kinaaray hotay

jinko aas nahi unkay bohat parestaar hain
baat hoti jo chaahnay walay hamaray hotay

zindagi ki tasveer main ajab bayrangi hai mehram
is tasveer main kuch rang hamaray kuch rang tumharay hotay!

could anyone please suggest a title?

Zalim_Wadera June 5, 2005, 5:03pm 2

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Buhat khoob. I liked your flight of thought and inherent philosophy in it. Keep up your good work.
Title ka idea naheen ho raha for the time being.

Mano85 June 5, 2005, 5:36pm 3

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thanks for the appreciation :)

Renegade June 5, 2005, 8:49pm 4

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mashaAllah bhot khoob
keep it up mano85

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 6, 2005, 3:54am 5

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Nice one…

U can Name it… **KAASH **

Proposed new policy on farewell threads

Renegade June 6, 2005, 6:59am 6

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this is just weird i just wrote something with the title “Kaash” hehehe

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 6, 2005, 9:32am 7

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Nothing is Weired…

----> TimePass

Mano85 June 6, 2005, 12:02pm 8

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i already have one with that title :)