***i feel u...................

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

queen_maliha September 6, 2010, 10:26pm 1

when i close my eyes…
i feel u…
when i open my eyes …
i feel u…
when i do my any work …
i feel u…
when i feel relaxe…
i feel u…
when the rain start…
i feel u…
when i wet in rain …
i feel u…
when every breath i take…
i feel u…
u r in my mind …
u r in my soul…
you on i…
and…
and i on u…

Amarbail September 7, 2010, 12:08am 2

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Good one … :k:

Desii_Fly_Chick September 7, 2010, 12:17am 3

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nicee ...

Smash_Boy September 7, 2010, 2:29pm 4

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really nice n beautiful

Mirch September 7, 2010, 2:40pm 5

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feeling anybody outside wedding lock is not allowed. just kidding . Beautiful poem.

queen_maliha September 8, 2010, 10:52am 6

Re: ***i feel u…

hmmmm…
ye poem meri bazat e khud apni hai:aliyish:

silent_desire September 15, 2010, 2:05pm 7

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really main QM so nice ...........good one

UZ September 15, 2010, 2:30pm 8

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Good one

Sheal September 15, 2010, 5:50pm 9

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nice feelings :)

Aleesha_Chaudhary September 16, 2010, 1:23am 10

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nice :k:

ullujii September 16, 2010, 3:47pm 11

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very nıce ı really feel her when ı wet ın the rain she always live ın my mind she always on me

queen_maliha September 16, 2010, 4:51pm 12

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hmmm ullu jii