I don't know what to name it :)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Par par alam fazal ho ya
Kadi mann apnay nu parya hi nai

Ja ja warda MANDAR, Maseeta
Kadi mann apnay wich waraya hi nai

Ai rab asmani udaya pharda, jera karr bheta onu pharya hi nai

Sirtay Topi , tay niyat khoti
Pala ki topi siir tar kay

Tasbee phiri par dil na phirya
Pala ki tasbee hath phar kay

Chilay kitay par rab na milya
Pala ki chilyaa wich warr kay

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Re: I don’t know what to name it :slight_smile:

I liked it man :k: … very deep…

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Re: I don’t know what to name it :slight_smile:

superb…awesome…lajawab :k:

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Re: I don’t know what to name it :slight_smile:

Thank amal I really liked it tha t you liked it :slight_smile:

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Re: I don’t know what to name it :slight_smile:

@WHO_AM_I
Thanks it is my first post in the poetry section.

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Re: I don't know what to name it :)

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Thanks it is my first post in the poetry section.
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And very are looking forward to see more from you :)