I aM OuT oF MiNd

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aik shair ki tasheeh karwani hai. Aaj kal main bemaar hoon to is wajah say dimagh kaam naheen kar raha.
Unkay aanay aajati hai jo chehray pay ronaq

Woh samajhtay hain bemaar ka haal achha hai


Yeh shair main nay apni dost ko likhna hai.......dimagh kaam naheen kar raha. Maloom naheen kahan ghalati hai. Agar hai to meher bani kar kay darusti (asal lafz darusti hota hai Darustagi naheen) kar dain. Waisay yeh shair meri halat ka ghamaz bhi hai.:(

Peshgi shukriya.
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unkay anaay say ju aajati hay mOoN per ronaq
wu samajhtay hein kay beemar ka haal acha hay**
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not sure kay ‘aanay say’ hay ya nahi hay…:stuck_out_tongue:
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its not moon FARA ji its chahraa

unkay aanay say ju aajaati hay chahray pay ronaq
woh samajhtay hain beemar ka haal achcha hay

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OMG jo bhi likhna hay jaldi likh do kaheen aisa na ho k baad main sher badlna paray...

Wo ayadat ko meri atay hain lo aur suno
Aaj hi khobi'ey taqdeer say haal acha hay

PK main nay ye sher dono tarha say parha hay "Chahray" and also "mooN"

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Thanks Khan and Nakhan. Nakhan, wah wah..................irshaad.........irshaad.

Registered Valentine Couples.....
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PK dear… I am not 100% Sure.. but its not Chehray… Its muN .. :slight_smile:

Ghalib Uncle :jhanda:

Anti Valentine Group !!!
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:konfused:…!