I am new here and need a style check!

Oh cmon! I dont think I made FUN of myself and trust me, my self esteem is NOT low at the moment! I guess, you call this being 'brutally honest', nothing else. I am sure I didnt sound desperate too! So there. Anyway, I have a positive approach to life. I believe one should be able to laugh at themselves, take things in a light way... as it is, there are alot of problems in life.