I am new at Gupshup.... Plz Comment!

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Re: I am new at Gupshup… Plz Comment!

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Wu aisa gaya k phir aaya nahi,
ussi ki sada ki thee mein muntazir,
magar usnay dar khat-khataya nahi
Yeh derwaza bhee meinay khola nahi…

Last line match nahi kar rahi, baqi ki poem achi hay, welcome to GS poetry thanks for sharing…

sorry it was suppose to be

***yeh derwaza phir mainay khola nahi…

thanx for your comments

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