I am new at Gupshup.... Plz Comment!

Re: I am new at Gupshup.... Plz Comment!

Wu aisa gaya k phir aaya nahi,
ussi ki sada ki thee mein muntazir,
magar usnay dar khat-khataya nahi
*Yeh derwaza bhee meinay khola nahi...
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Last line match nahi kar rahi, baqi ki poem achi hay, welcome to GS poetry thanks for sharing..... :-)