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aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww bro…i didn’t mean to belittle ur Ghazal…believe me!..i think “rasmii waah waah” takes us no where…in the realm of Ghazal goii and Ghazal saraaii one must improve with time…i do that all the time…what i wrote was just for discussion sake and not for knitpicking…i swear…its it was gaanaa bajaanaa i wud’ve said nothing. Ghazal is a very exact art and even the slightest deviation makes it technically unacceptable. the ghazal must be in meter and sung as such…thats what i tried to show where the great poet and great singer erred. its for, as i said b4, only for discussion. please don’t mind. i’m sorry if i said that i shouldn’t have said. i apologize.
as far as Bahzad Lucknauwi is concered, i think he is a baa-kamaal shaa’ir but anyone can make mistakes coz ustaad sho’araas like Ghalib N Zauq and Momin and Mir and DaGh made mistakes but i’m quick to add that since we know they have immense knowledge of the language and she’r goii that they have the so called “poetic license” to have knowingly made mistakes…it was the necessity for them!
in this Ghazal, Bahzaad Lucknauwii made a critical error when he said:**
**…mushkil pas-e-mushkil aa jaaye
he talks about something [muskil] to happen in the future and then he says “mushkil pas e mushkil” [hardship behind the hardship]…which is not correct it should have been “mushkil pesh-e-mushkil” [hardship ahead of hardship] aa jaaye! i hope its was a typo. “‘pas’ or ‘pesh’ are so close” 
i hope u got my point…so, lets take this as an extention of our discussion on the Ghazal… thank you for bardaasht karoing me…
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