hur shama bhuji rafta rafta, hur khwaab luta dheere dheere

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 11, 2003, 7:01pm

*hur shama bhuji rafta rafta, hur khwaab luta dheere dheere
sheesha na sahi pather bhee na tha, dil toot gaya dheere dheere

barsoon mein marasim bantay hain lamho-n mein bhala kia toot-ein ge
tu mujh se bichurna chahay tu deewaar utha dheere dheere

ahsaas howa barbadi ka jub saray ghar mein dhool uri
aayee hai hamare aangun mein pat-jhur ki hawa dheere dheere

dil kaise jala, kis waQt jala, hum ko bhee pata aakhir mein chala
pehla hai dhuwaan chupke chupke, sulgi hai chitta dheere dheere

wo haath paraay ho bhee gay ab duur ka rishta hai Qaiser
aatee hai meri tanhaai mein khushbo-e-hina dheere dheere*

Dilsay · June 11, 2003, 7:03pm

wooooooooo

hur shama bhuji rafta rafta, hur khwaab luta dheere dheere
sheesha na sahi pather bhee na tha, dil toot gaya dheere dheere

khush rahoo sis

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 11, 2003, 7:24pm

thanks for liking bro

baziger · June 11, 2003, 7:24pm

wo haath paraay ho bhee gay ab duur ka rishta hai Qaiser
aatee hai meri tanhaai mein khushbo-e-hina dheere dheere ...

wah.. bhut khoob

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 11, 2003, 7:27pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by baziger: *
wo haath paraay ho bhee gay ab duur ka rishta hai Qaiser
aatee hai meri tanhaai mein khushbo-e-hina dheere dheere ...

wah.. bhut khoob
[/QUOTE]

thanks for liking :)

system · June 11, 2003, 7:36pm

WOW :k::k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 11, 2003, 7:49pm

thanx for liking viv

ullujii · June 11, 2003, 7:58pm

very nice :k: one of my fave ghazal thanks for sharying

BrokenSky · June 11, 2003, 8:03pm

Buhat Khoob:k:
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Amarbail1 · June 12, 2003, 10:05am

Re: hur shama bhuji rafta rafta, hur khwaab luta dheere dheere

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HeArT HaCKeR
Awesome choice …:k::k::k:

Zakhmi_Umar · June 12, 2003, 10:43am

Re: hur shama bhuji rafta rafta, hur khwaab luta dheere dheere

very nice :k: buhat khooooob :k: thanks for sharing

aysha · June 12, 2003, 10:49am

…excellent

Zakhmi_Umar · June 12, 2003, 10:51am

Ayesha tell me one thing , jab aap ne apne comments post kiye tu
Quote ka button kis ki window mien se press kiya thah ???

aysha · June 12, 2003, 11:06am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *

Ayesha tell me one thing , jab aap ne apne comments post kiye tu
Quote ka button kis ki window mien se press kiya thah ?????
[/QUOTE]

wat r u talking abt, i didnt even press quote ka button?

Zakhmi_Umar · June 12, 2003, 11:10am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aysha: *

wat r u talking abt, i didnt even press quote ka button?
[/QUOTE]

acha theak hai mien samajh giya , clear ho giya , thori si confusion thi
thanks for replying :)

aysha · June 12, 2003, 11:13am

teekh heh magar baat kya thee?

Zakhmi_Umar · June 12, 2003, 11:17am

hahahahah lol

koi khaas baat nahi thi , asal mien mien samjhta tha k jab mujhe mail aati hai tu koi mere message per reply karta hai lekin woh jo upper button hai na add reply ka agar us se aap reply karti ho tu wo mail bhi mere inbox mien aat hai agar mien email notification ko check kiya ho tu bas y hi confusion thi

Azad · June 12, 2003, 11:22am

dheere dheere

aysha · June 12, 2003, 11:26am

ab samaj aye!

by the way aap ka naam ZAKHMI umar kyun heh?

Zakhmi_Umar · June 12, 2003, 11:27am

Piyar ko Bharana hai