humsafar

golgapay tu achay tha
magr un mei khati na thi

woh humsafar tha
magr uss se humnawai na thi

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Mehndi thi , Mayun tha, Dhoki thi magar
Khali hath reh gai khirad munh dikhai na thi :teary2:

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muqawee ap k sher fit nhi hota bc

na mehndi thi na mayoon tha na dholki thi
hath khali na thay khirad k muuu dikhai thi

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sorry I forgot first two episodes :hehe:

Lets try something else:

Khirad ko bagher dahi ke dahi bhalle banane bheja
Fareeda ko mot nahin aai, Zareena sharmai na thi

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ok i wish i could do poetry i m zero............

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Try something on:

Bicharte waqt un aankhon main thi hamari ghazal line :p

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:ASA: it's my fav. shair.

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DA yi kia hi:bummer:

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bicharte waqt un ankion main thi hamari ghazal
wohi ghazal jo muqawee ne likhi hi na thi

omg i m so bad :smack:
pata nhi sher k wazan ka kya kiya mei ne :rotfl:

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STA dehko mei ne kya hal kiya iss ka :rotfl:

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yar poetry krnay ki koshish kr rahi hun :sid:

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khair hai. warna koi aur iss bhi bura hal kar daita.

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aap logo ke post parh parh ke mujhe bhi shayari ka shauq hota hai magar afsos shair khaye hi nahi...........

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DA poetry me aker flooding kar rahi hao:faizy:

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lolz muqawee ne invitation de this k un k forum pe bhi au poetry ka shouk paida kr rahi hun :D

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Bigarte waqt un hathon main thi wo bhari bailan
bailan bhi wo jo kisi pa kabhi aazmaai na thi

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Thank you Devi ji. yeh aap sab logon ko forum hai. feel free to post :D

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:aj:

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:hat:

yeah tht wht i m trying to do :@:

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:mirch: