ikk deed ki khwahish hai
parda sirka do tum
mai rahon mai bhattka hun
manzil dikhla do tum
awara qalab thehra,
kabhi jugnu,kabhi phool,kabhi khushbu ka shedai
jo dil ki na sune,wo dildaar bana do tum
ikk umer lagi hamko wo bat batane mai
kabhi hum they jaldi mai,kabhi ujlat mai they tum
bole they do alfaaz,kuch sookhe halaq ke saath
ikk lafz kahin tha “hum” or kahin or parra tha “tum”…
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If their is any meaning to the word lafz !! then we must admire shazia ji before digging its meaning in any type of expression through poetry !!
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hummm
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thank you so much both of you :)
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not bad
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hmmm
zabardast shaizia
but ye kis ke lye hai?
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zabardast shazia sahiba :-)
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ikk lafz kahin tha "hum" or kahin or parra tha "tum"......
Simply awesome. very meaning full poem
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not bad
thanx 4 the true comments...will b waiting for your good one :)
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hmmm zabardast shaizia but ye kis ke lye hai?
for not a specific person...thanx for liking.
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thanx Meena,Khan n Sannaan.
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bole they do alfaaz,kuch sookhe halaq ke saath
ikk lafz kahin tha "hum" or kahin or parra tha "tum"......
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very deep feelings...**
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bole they do alfaaz,kuch sookhe halaq ke saath ikk lafz kahin tha "hum" or kahin or parra tha "tum"...... **
very deep feelings...**
thanx for liking Raje.