"Hum Safar"

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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" Hum Safar "

Buhat he mudat key baad kul jub

kitab-e-Maze ko mein ney khola

buhat sey chehrey nazar mein utrey

Buhat sey namoun pey dil paseija

Ek aisa safha bhee ous mein aeiya

Likha howa thaa jo aansoun sey

keh jiss ka unwan "HUM SAFAR"tha

jo safha sub sey he muatber thaa

khuch aur aanso pheir ous per tapkey

pheir ous sey aagey mein perh na paya

kitab-e- mazee ko bund ker key

tumharee yadoun mein khoo gaya mein

ager tou milta tu kaisa hota

enhee khayaloun mein so gaya mein.

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:) Great :)

keep it up!

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Nice1:K:

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achi koshish hai.

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Thanx all

Thanx aap sub ney like kiya 

     thank u so much .
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beautiful :)

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nice.. :k:

keep it up.. :slight_smile:

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Great!!! :bravo:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
beautiful :)
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Thank u so much u like it .

     i need ur apperecian.

Thanx
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yup…:k:…thnx for sharing

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Thanx aap ney like kiya aur apney qemte waqt mein sey es ko perh ker saraha.

   Thank u
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Thanx u r also great .

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by maheen sajid: *
achi koshish hai.
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Thank u , aap ka itna keh deina he buhat khuch hota hey merey liyee.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
Nice1:K:
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 Thanx & buhat buhat THanx
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Thanku Galaxy

      u like it . Thank u so much
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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
:) Great :)

keep it up!
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jee zaror ub tu khuch nah khuch likhna he parey ga naa.

    Thank u so much
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awesome:k::k:

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Someone read that to me a long time ago...never got a chance to write it down. Thanks. It's beautiful.

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very nice… :k:

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Buhat Khoob:k:…