Hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

[Amal]

RaatoN ko jaag ke terey leeye hum ashq bahaa kar deikheiN ge raahoN meiN teri ummeedoN ke hum deeye jalaa kar deikheiN ge

kehtey heiN mohabbat manzil ho to saari umr safar meiN kat’ti hey
hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

jo dhool utthey gi rastoN sey terey sang ke aevaz hum seh leiN gey
hum apni nigah ke sarey rang teri raah meiN gaNwa kar deikheiN ge

jo dard miley ga dunya sey hum khushi sey ley kar rakh leiN ge
jo zakham lagey ga rasmoN ka terey naam pe kha kar deikheiN ge

jo rang lagey ga tujh ko bahala us rang meiN khud ko rang leiN ge
hum aaj sey apni har raahat teri khushi meiN paa kar deikheiN ge

hameiN jitni duwaaeiN aati heiN un sab meiN tujh ko maaNgeiN ge
socha hey dil ki har mannat terey naam lagaa kar deikheiN ge

phooloN sey yaari kar deikh phooloN ney bhi hum ko khaar deeye
is baar to socha hey daaman kaaNtoN meiN uljha kar deikheiN ge

hameiN seem-o-zar ke meloN sey teri sooni galyaaN piyaari heiN
hum chorr ke apney mehloN ko terey ghar pe aa kar deikheiN ge

tassavvur ki ujli sochoN ko aqeedat si hey terey naam ke saath
hum apni zaat ke darpan meiN bas tujhi ko laa kar deikheiN ge

chaahey aab miley ya saraab miley ab khaof nahi kisi khatrey sey
is dasht-e-fareb meiN terey leeye hum dhoka kha kar deikheiN ge

chalo maana ke ishq ki baazi meiN harjaana jaan bhi hota hey
hum kuch bhi ho har qeemat par ye juwa lagaa kar deikheiN ge

By: Amal

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: Hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

*Originally posted by Amal: *

RaatoN ko jaag ke terey leeye hum ashq bahaa kar deikheiN ge raahoN meiN teri ummeedoN ke hum deeye jalaa kar deikheiN ge

kehtey heiN mohabbat manzil ho to saari umr safar meiN kat’ti hey
hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

jo dhool utthey gi rastoN sey terey sang ke aevaz hum seh leiN gey
hum apni nigah ke sarey rang teri raah meiN gaNwa kar deikheiN ge

jo dard miley ga dunya sey hum khushi sey ley kar rakh leiN ge
jo zakham lagey ga rasmoN ka terey naam pe kha kar deikheiN ge

jo rang lagey ga tujh ko bahala us rang meiN khud ko rang leiN ge
hum aaj sey apni har raahat teri khushi meiN paa kar deikheiN ge

hameiN jitni duwaaeiN aati heiN un sab meiN tujh ko maaNgeiN ge
socha hey dil ki har mannat terey naam lagaa kar deikheiN ge

phooloN sey yaari kar deikh phooloN ney bhi hum ko khaar deeye
is baar to socha hey daaman kaaNtoN meiN uljha kar deikheiN ge

hameiN seem-o-zar ke meloN sey teri sooni galyaaN piyaari heiN
hum chorr ke apney mehloN ko terey ghar pe aa kar deikheiN ge

tassavvur ki ujli sochoN ko aqeedat si hey terey naam ke saath
hum apni zaat ke darpan meiN bas tujhi ko laa kar deikheiN ge

chaahey aab miley ya saraab miley ab khaof nahi kisi khatrey sey
is dasht-e-fareb meiN terey leeye hum dhoka kha kar deikheiN ge

chalo maana ke ishq ki baazi meiN harjaana jaan bhi hota hey
hum kuch bhi ho har qeemat par ye juwa lagaa kar deikheiN ge

By: Amal

wow Amal bahii i’m speechless.
The whole ghazal is zaber10:k: :k: :k: :k: :k: :k:
just want to say thanks a lot for sharing another master piece:flower1:
keep it up:~)

[_Passionate]

hameiN jitni duwaaeiN aati heiN un sab meiN tujh ko maaNgeiN ge
socha hey dil ki har mannat terey naam lagaa kar deikheiN ge

phooloN sey yaari kar deikh phooloN ney bhi hum ko khaar deeye
is baar to socha hey daaman kaaNtoN meiN uljha kar deikheiN ge

chaahey aab miley ya saraab miley ab khaof nahi kisi khatrey sey
is dasht-e-fareb meiN terey leeye hum dhoka kha kar deikheiN ge

loved it :k: thanks for sharing amal

[chand_chehra]

Re: Hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

*Originally posted by Amal: *

RaatoN ko jaag ke terey leeye hum ashq bahaa kar deikheiN ge raahoN meiN teri ummeedoN ke hum deeye jalaa kar deikheiN ge

kehtey heiN mohabbat manzil ho to saari umr safar meiN kat’ti hey
hum phir bhi apni aaNkhoN meiN terey khaab sajaa kar deikheiN ge

jo dhool utthey gi rastoN sey terey sang ke aevaz hum seh leiN gey
hum apni nigah ke sarey rang teri raah meiN gaNwa kar deikheiN ge

jo dard miley ga dunya sey hum khushi sey ley kar rakh leiN ge
jo zakham lagey ga rasmoN ka terey naam pe kha kar deikheiN ge

jo rang lagey ga tujh ko bahala us rang meiN khud ko rang leiN ge
hum aaj sey apni har raahat teri khushi meiN paa kar deikheiN ge

hameiN jitni duwaaeiN aati heiN un sab meiN tujh ko maaNgeiN ge
socha hey dil ki har mannat terey naam lagaa kar deikheiN ge

phooloN sey yaari kar deikh phooloN ney bhi hum ko khaar deeye
is baar to socha hey daaman kaaNtoN meiN uljha kar deikheiN ge

hameiN seem-o-zar ke meloN sey teri sooni galyaaN piyaari heiN
hum chorr ke apney mehloN ko terey ghar pe aa kar deikheiN ge

tassavvur ki ujli sochoN ko aqeedat si hey terey naam ke saath
hum apni zaat ke darpan meiN bas tujhi ko laa kar deikheiN ge

chaahey aab miley ya saraab miley ab khaof nahi kisi khatrey sey
is dasht-e-fareb meiN terey leeye hum dhoka kha kar deikheiN ge

chalo maana ke ishq ki baazi meiN harjaana jaan bhi hota hey
hum kuch bhi ho har qeemat par ye juwa lagaa kar deikheiN ge

By: Amal

Beautifulllllll :k:

[SuraJ]

jo dard miley ga dunya sey hum khushi sey ley kar rakh leiN ge
jo zakham lagey ga rasmoN ka terey naam pe kha kar deikheiN ge

wah bahut khoob waisey tu sari poem hi bahut achi hai yeh sher bahut hi pasand aya. bahut alaa.:)

[Amarbail1]

Well done Amal
The whole thread is beautiful …:k:

[Dilsay]

Really beatiful....

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Amal Poorii Ghazal hii buhat Khoobsurat hay but i love this sheir

''phooloN sey yaari kar deikh phooloN ney bhi hum ko khaar deeye
is baar to socha hey daaman kaaNtoN meiN uljha kar deikheiN ge''

Aur Ye* say koii sheir nahiN likhaa bait bazi meiN hii kaam Aa jaata :~P

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

WOW Amal bhai u’re a gr8 poet :k::k::k: i luv ur ghazals and poems Keep it up

[jasmeen]

wahhhh lajawab amal

[Amal]

Once again I am thankful to everyone who liked this ghazal and aired their
appreciation. ghazal kisi ke, &Passionate, CC, SuraJ, Amarbail, Dilsay
and jasmeen, aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya:flower1:

Gul thanx for liking the ghazal. “Ye*” wali baat ka aenda khayaal rakhooN ga:)

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
Amal bhai u’re a gr8 poet

Now that’s total exaggeration, but I appreciate your interests in my work.
Thanx a lot:)

[Pramod]

Amal sahab,

hamesha kii tarah aap se aik aur pyaari sii gahzal padhne ko milii. har sher bahot achha hai.
dheroN daad kubul kiiye.

aakhrii sher ke, doosre misre meiN, "juwa" ko "daaw" se replace kar ke dekheiN eik baar..na jaane kyoN mujhe ye lafz behtar laga. just a suggestion..nothing else...u can leave it as it is...

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

wooohoo:hula:

bhae jan ap nei boht piaree ghazal likhee hei :k:

[Muslim_Queen]

raahoN meiN teri ummeedoN ke hum deeye jalaa kar deikheiN ge

beautiful
keep up the great work.

You and dilsay should publish your poems.