*~*Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha*~*

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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MERI SAB SE PEHLI KOSHISH SAB SE PEHLI GAZAL.

Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha Ke Tera Saath Chahiye
Jeeney Ke Vastey Tu Teri Yaad Bohat Hai

Yaadon Ka Ik Hajoom Hai Mere Dil Ke Aas Paas<O:p
Tanhaai Ka Meri Inhein Ehsaas Bohat Hai

Chaahein Ge Ke Mill Jao Kissi Roz Humein Tum
<O:p****Garchey Is Janam Mein Ye Dushwaar Bohat Hai

Aao Ke Mil Ke Chaltey Hain Kuch Dour Taluk Hum
<O:p****Sab Jante Hain Rah-e-Vafa Pur-Khaar Bohat Hai

Roka Bhi Nahi Hum Ne Ke Ye Jaantey Thay Hum
<O:p****Meri Taruf Se Dil Tera Be-Eatbaar Bohat Hai

USS Nay Kaha Tha Aaye Ga Lenay Humein Sama<O:p*
USS Din Ka Ab Humein Intazaar Bohat Hai

:flower2:~by~Sama~:flower2:****

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Re: ~Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~

Very nice First Ghazal… :flower:

FLOW is a bit Prob in it… So.. Now.. as U are Good enough… Re arrange it To have better Flow :slight_smile:

toun itney...
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Re: ~Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~

Thanks G_S. Well Plz If U Can Help Me And Tell Me That How Should It To Be.
Thanks Alot For Deep Concern.:flower2:

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USS Din Ka Ab Humein Intazaar Bohat Hai

Well said Khush rahoo....

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Re: ~Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~

Thanks DILSAY…
Lakin Unka Shumaar Un Logon Mein Hai Jinka MOTO Hai…
Voh Vadaa Hi Kya Jo Vafa Ho Gaya:teary3:

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Re: ~*Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~*

Aap ke ya baat achi lagee ka aap nay thanks behi kaha tu Dilsay kaha...

Dua hai ka un ka Moto change hoo jaya...

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Re: ~Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~

Aap DILSAY Suntey Rahiye Hum DILSAY kehay Raheinge.:flower2:

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Re: ~Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~

Achi tehreer hey Sama:k::slight_smile: thanx for sharing with us. And welcome aboard :slight_smile:

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Re: ~*Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~*

will Try to... Although I am not good at it.. BUT... Try karonga :)

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Re: ~*Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~*

di'ya jalay rakhna

Tu ...
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Re: ~*Hum Ne Ye Kab Kaha~*

AMAL.........G_S.............AZAD..
Aap sab ka shukriya....or G_S I will 4 that day.
*AZAD jee aap nay kis diye ki baat ki hai....DIL KA DIYA.....YA.........UMEED KA DIYA....:) *