hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**dil ki chokhat pe jo aik deep jala rakha hai
tere laut aanay ka amkaan saja rakha hai

saans tak bhi nahin letay hain tujhey sochtay waqt
hum ne is kaam ko bhi kal pey utha rakha hai

rooth jatay ho to kuch aur haseen lagtay ho
hum ne ye soch k hi tum ko khafa rakha hai

tum jissey rotha hua chor gaye they aik din
hum ne us shaam ko seenay se laga rakha hai

chain lenay nahin detey kissi taur mujhey
teri yaadon ne jo tofaan uthaa rakha hai

janay walay ne kaha tha k wo lautey ga zaroor
aik issi aa’ss pe derwaza khula rakha hai

terey janay se jo aik dhool uthi thi ghum ki
hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

mujh ko kul shaam se wo yaad bohut anay laga
dil ne muddat se jo aik shakhs bhula rakha hai

aakhri baar jo aaya tha merey naam
mein ne us khat ko dil se laga rakha hai **

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

:cb: I thought dhol ( dram) hy so was suprised galy main kion nahi hy:D Ab pura prha tu hoa yeh dhool mati wala hy:hehe: Nice sharing

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

Neyhaet umda **Koyal **:k: … oops… bholibisri :wink:

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nice sharin :p

gnews stick to poetry :p

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:smilestar:** Apny kam sy kam rakho:chai:**

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:k:

life's so unfair
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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

meri chai thandee hoo rahe hai …muge batao mai mat lagao :smilestar:

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

Beautiful… I liked these three shairs mores… simple and dil ko choonaY waalaY lafz… :slight_smile:

Shaair kaa naam? :vivo:

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

abhi tu ap se roothnay ka moqa he nahi mila :smiley:

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OK … yes you are KOYAL and/or NikamiJano :rotfl:

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koen WO kia ap se bohat rothti haiN:snooty:

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:smiley: trying to change the style.. copying me :p?

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chaiey doabar bana day :stuck_out_tongue:

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ji nahin agay koyal nikami thei ab apnay ko b saath main shamil kar lea:hoonh:

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boht khoob jano g :p

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

mane post ki hwi bohat pahlay ye :stuck_out_tongue:

thanks for sharing it again kooooooyal opssyyy bholibisri :mocking:

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:hehe:

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shukria bholi ko JAAN kah k bhulaya ap ne wesay ap male ho ya female …agar mail hain tu phir:blush:

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

ji main tu new hoon meray ko kia pata pahlay se hwuei huei hai aur ye koyal sahib ko kahin dekhna he parey gha k kon sahiba hain jo bholi ki personality kharab karnay pe tuli hain:halo: :snooty:

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Re: hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

thanks felow:) . it's good news u liked it :)