Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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From my usernotes (online biyaaz:cb: ) :snooty:

Ronay say nahi hasil kuch ay Dil-e-saudaiee
AshKoon ki bhi barbaadi, Daman ki bhi ruswayee

Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN
Is Paar bhi tanhayee , Uss Paar bhi Tanhayee !

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

ahhh Beautiful! just 2 shers or is there a full ghazal?

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yeah too good; but couldnt resist to replace ''daman ki ruswaeey'' with ''daman ki dhulwaeey''

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

Wahh...Bohat khoob! :)

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

Wow! love it,....

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

Wah…Amazing stuff :k:

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I only know these two.

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

nice one :D

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

bohat khoob

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

bohat khoob :)

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

wowwww
beautifullll :k:

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????
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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

excellent:k:
I like the last one more!

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Kissi doosraY kaY ash’aar par dad wasool kartay huaY ajeeb saa lug rahaa hai magar :clown: kiyaa karooN share karnaY kaY shukriye kaY taur par shukriya kaa jawab shukriya saY daY daitaa hooN :stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: Hum Log Samandur kay Bichray hoye saahil haiN

Wah, wah..........amazingly captivating. Thanks a lot.