Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 5:58pm 1

Yeh Soch Kar Ke Gham Ke Kharidaar Aa Gaye
Hum Khwaab Bechne Ko Sar-e-Baazaar Aa Gaye

Aawaaz De Ke Chhup Gayi Har Baar Zindagi
Hum Aise Saada Dil Thei Ke Har Baar Aa Gaye

Hum kaj Ada Chiragh Thei Jab Bhi Hawa Chali
Taaqon Ko Chorr kar Sar-e-Deewar Aa Gaye

Sooraj ki Dosti Pe Jinhe’n Naaz Tha Faraz
Woh Bhi Toh Tere Sayaa-e-Deewar Aa Gaye

punjabi_kuri_1 December 9, 2012, 6:00pm 2

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

wow… luved it :k:

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 6:32pm 3

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

samajh aa gaya?

punjabi_kuri_1 December 9, 2012, 6:33pm 4

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

bohat achy sy..

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 6:36pm 5

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

teesra shair samjha do, without being senti

punjabi_kuri_1 December 9, 2012, 6:41pm 6

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

matlab chiragh ki manind thy. jub bhi hawa chali to taqon ki bjaye deewar k saye chaly aye
kyu. k taqon main to hawa sy chiragh bhuj jaty hain

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 6:48pm 7

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

taqon main to hawa kam aati hai, deewar to khuli hawa main nahin hoti..

punjabi_kuri_1 December 9, 2012, 6:50pm 8

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

taq b to deewar main bany hoty hain na

ek darbaar main dekha tha

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 6:51pm 9

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

dewar main bane hote hai to wahan diye hawa se mehfooz rehte hai as compared to sar e deewar

Kinzz December 9, 2012, 6:51pm 10

Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

PK what exactly is your connecting with being senti?

punjabi_kuri_1 December 9, 2012, 6:53pm 11

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

But agr drakht ki hieght hi taq tak ho to

m just a pagal girl
lol

muqawwee123 December 9, 2012, 6:54pm 12

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

hawa kiya sirf darakhton se aati hai?

yousaf_shah December 9, 2012, 7:01pm 13

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

oh no…main ney tu pehlay he kha thaa…lol

muqawwee123 December 10, 2012, 11:47am 14

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

Pk needs to be senti for explaining poetry

jiia December 10, 2012, 11:52am 15

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

meri fav ghazal hy khas touper yi shair

Sooraj ki Dosti Pe Jinhe’n Naaz Tha Faraz
Woh Bhi Toh Tere Sayaa-e-Deewar Aa Gaye

muqawwee123 December 10, 2012, 11:57am 16

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

shayar kiya kehna chahta hai, iss shair main

jiia December 10, 2012, 12:01pm 17

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

yi k vo jis pe sab merty thy wo mujh per mer gaye

muqawwee123 December 10, 2012, 12:03pm 18

Re: Hum khwab bechne sar e bazar aa gae

per ye aisa nahin ke jinhe doosron ki dosti pe naaz tha, jab unn doston ne ghaas nahin daali.. to mere mathe lag gaya