hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ok the real goes here…

hum jisko apna maan samajh bethe thay
wohi hamen anjaan samajh bethe thay..

hum ne piyar main sahay jinke zulm o sitam
woh hamen bayzubaan samajh bethe thay

hum ne kaha, “piyar main zameer kaisa?”
woh isay apnay shayan e shaan samajh bethe thay

hum ne kiya kiya na samjhana chaha unhe..
aur woh ulta hee saara deewan samajh bethe thay

koi safaai dena bhi apnay kaam naa aai…
woh in baton ko khud pe bohtan samajh bethe thay…

hum piyar main unke har baat taaal jaatay aur…
…woh piyar main hum ko naadaan samajh bethey thay..

kiya kiya na ummedain rakkhee theen meena nay unse..
khataa apni thi… unhe insaan samajh bethe thay…!!!

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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

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hum jisko apna maan samajh bethe thay
wohi hamen anjaan samajh bethe thay..

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my shair was quite 1 of way of the other iz similar to ths 1 :)

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mmmmm:bobo:

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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

ye mmmmmmmmmmm ka mtlb??? praise kernay liye kia words km par gaye? hehe

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hello meena g :blush:

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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

hello i think no one admired my poetry... :(

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meyn hon nah :crying:

Timepass / Uncle Ehsan's Baithak - August 2012
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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

its wonderful Meena :slight_smile:

MM ko poetry ka tou pata he nahi hai woo bechare kiya admire karai :cb:

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khod ko to jese boht pata he :barbie:

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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

hahahhah
is forum ka naam honay chahye tha.. "lar magar piyar se" sub yahan lartay rehtay hain... :)

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Its too good g. Keep it up..

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Aap ney tou her jaga apni taang araani hoti hai. Hai na?

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g han :chai:

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tay fir keep it up…

65 Years of Independence - Pakistan
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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

u kyo naraz hoing :)

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Re: hum jis ko apna maan, REAL ONE..

kon naraz hoing? may to kahing ke agr koi achha likhing to usay shabashi to dayiing... kam az kam... haan nahin to... :(