Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

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AankhoN sey meri is leeye laali nahi jaati
yaadoN sey koi raat jo khaali nahi jaati

ab umr na maosam na wo rastey ke wo paltey
is dil ki magar khaam khayaali nahi jaati

mangey to agar jaan to haNs kar tujhey dey deiN
teri to koi baat bhi taali nahi jaati

aaey koi aa kar ye terey dard sambhaley
hum sey to ye jageer ab sambhaali nahi jaati

hum jaan sey jaaein ge tabhi baat baney gi
tum sey to koi raah nikaali nahi jaati
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Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

dard, jaageer???

ishq bhalaY chanGaY aadmi ko deewaanaa banaa detaa hai :P

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

Nice :)

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

aaey koi aa kar ye terey dard sambhaley
hum sey to ye jageer ab sambhaali nahi jaati

wah bohet khoob

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

mangey to agar jaan to haNs kar tujhey dey deiN
teri to koi baat bhi taali nahi jaati

very nice

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

good 1

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

stunningly beautiful; helplessness at its heights expressed in utter beauty. thanks for sharing

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

Achi hay buhat!

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

Boht khoob !!! =)

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

ye kaam na karna :p

baqi ki Poem achi hey:-)

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

wesay wo aisa kis k leay kaR rahay Gul-e-tea :D

Re: Hum jaan sey jaaeiN ge tabhi baat baney gi...

Aymal jaan se mut jaien plzzzz koi na koi rah niqal he aiey ghi :)
nice gazal :)