kisi Ki dhuN meiN kisi k gumaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
hamaray asshk chamaktaY heiN us Ki aankhooN meiN
zameeN Ka rizq heiN auR aasmaaN meiN rehTaY heiN
nazar Ke saamnaY ab-e rawaaN Ke hotaY hovaY
Ju Ahl-e sabar heiN tashna LabbaaN rehtay heiN
yea Ahl-e daRd heiN En ka chalaN hei sab s allag
makaaN rakhtay heiN auR la’makaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
kisi saraab Ki Surat kisi gumaaN Ki Tarah
hum apnaY hast Ki raig-e ravaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
hamaray Bakht-e situm saaz ka kamal hei Yea
gull-e baHaaR heiN lekin KhizaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
ASA
2
wah ! kya kehny… bouhat khoob… :k:
nikii
3
kisi Ki dhuN meiN kisi k gumaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
zaberdast nikami janu ji :k:
Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
hamaray asshk chamaktaY heiN us Ki aankhooN meiN
zameeN Ka rizq heiN auR aasmaaN meiN rehTaY heiN
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Wah kia kehnay!
Buhat hee khoobsurat ghazal aur yeh sab se ziyada romantic shair hai :)
yea Ahl-e daRd heiN En ka chalaN hei sab s allag
makaaN rakhtay heiN auR la'makaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
Waah kiya baat, kiya khiyal hai. Buhut khoob Jano
thanks..nikii ,SB, aand sweet.....:)
thanks zaRa nawzi chando g … ;)..and wb …
Re: Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
Wah kia kehnay!
Buhat hee khoobsurat ghazal aur yeh sab se ziyada romantic shair hai :)
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thanks capo tuba ap ko tu har har waqat romance ki pari rahti..ahem ahem..is leayap ko tame nahi milta yahan anay ka :p
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*Originally posted by Shabemah: *
yea Ahl-e daRd heiN En ka chalaN hei sab s allag
makaaN rakhtay heiN auR la'makaaN meiN rehtaY heiN
Waah kiya baat, kiya khiyal hai. Buhut khoob Jano
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thanks shab g ......zara nawazi :)
Re: Re: Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
thanks capo tuba ap ko tu har har waqat romance ki pari rahti..ahem ahem..is leayap ko tame nahi milta yahan anay ka :p
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yeh dhuwan kahan se uth raha hai? ahem ahem ;)
Re: Re: Re: Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
ye wohi se uthe raha JAHAN se haar waqat uthta..
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For you,
Woh bhi kiya shamein thee jin ki shohratein mansoob theen
Be sabab khultay huwe baalon ki ruswaee k naam 
hanie
15
nikammi Jee...
bohat khoob haye.......... :)
Amal
16
Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
very umda:k: wesey ye hey kon jis ki
dhun aur gumaan meiN aap “rehtaY” heiN? 
Re: Re: hum ek khwaab ki suRat jahaN meiN rehtaY heiN
Rehtay ya rehtee?
gender gol mol likhien ge to jawab bhee gol mol aayega:)