Duniya ka kuch bura bhi tamaashaa nahee raha
Dil chahta thaa jis tarha waisa nahee raha
Un se mile bhi hum tu judai ke mor par
Kashti huwi naseeb tu dariya nahee raha
Kehtay thay ek pal na jeyenge tere bagair
Hum donoo reh gaye hain woh wada nahee raha
Kaate hain is tarha se tere baad shab-o-roz
Mein saans le raha thaa per zinda nahee raha
Aankhein bhi dekh dekh ke khwab aa gaee hain tang
Dil mein bhi ab woh shauk woh lapka nahee raha…
Amarbail aaj meri kismat kuchh ziada theek nahin hai
sab loag mujhay rulanay per tulay huway hain pehlay bohat pareshaan hooon aaj to mein
:roying++:
Kehtay thay ek pal na jeyenge tere bagair
Hum donoo reh gaye hain woh wada nahee raha
Kaate hain is tarha se tere baad shab-o-roz
Mein saans le raha thaa per zinda nahee raha
Aankhein bhi dekh dekh ke khwab aa gaee hain tang
Dil mein bhi ab woh shauk woh lapka nahee raha…
Wah… aik aik shair la-javab hai :k:… Thanks for sharing such a good stuff..
Re: Hum donoo reh gaye hain woh wada nahee raha
bahot khoob :k:
Un se mile bhi hum tu judai ke mor par
Kashti huwi naseeb tu dariya nahee raha
zabardast :-)
beautifull… as usuall:k:
Re: Hum donoo reh gaye hain woh wada nahee raha
[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amarbail: *
**Kehtay thay ek pal na jeyenge tere bagair
Hum donoo reh gaye hain woh wada nahee raha
Kaate hain is tarha se tere baad shab-o-roz
Mein saans le raha thaa per zinda nahee raha**
[/QUOTE]
so true!
Wonderful…
Great choice!
Bohat khoob...
Un se mile bhi hum tu judai ke mor par
Kashti huwi naseeb tu dariya nahee raha
Is ko Augusat ka " ghazal of the moth" ka khitab milna chahiya...:)
Bohot khoob :k:
Thanks for sharing
amirbilal: Mera maksad aap ke dil ko hurt karna nahee thaa, I do apologize agar meri thread ki wajah se aap ke dukh mein mazeed izaafa hogaya hai... Be happy ..!
Philanthrope: Aap ka be-had shukriya meri thread ko ap ne apne khobsurat alfaaz se nawaaza ... Im grateful !
Daagh, Vivacious, Baziger, Gadha, KhamoshNigahein and Azad aap sab dostoo ka bahut bahut shukriya for your inputs and appreciation towards my selection... !
Swera: Thanks a lot for your remarks and regarding the selection for the month of August... lets see what the Modz decide... Thanks anyways ... :)
excellent stuff! but :(
Thanks TajMahal...