Amal
July 22, 2005, 3:20am
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Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey
hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa’aat aakhri hey
wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog’waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
By: Amal
Koyal
July 22, 2005, 3:41am
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa’aat aakhri hey
beautiful Amal :k:
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
ahhh … beautifulll :k:
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
beautiful amal mujhy bhi dekhna hai
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
beautiful like always :-)
chanda: sab khariyat na?!?! waise yay peeliya kab hua :p
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
Nice one.
Tum ne jub chaha, hum ne maana
Humari dafa mulaqat aakhri thi?
Mojze to banda-e-kaamil ka meraaj hain
Humare liye yeh karamaat aakhri thi?
Aas ka khel tha yaa dil-luggi thi
humare peet pe yeh laat aakhri thi?
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
akheer ker dee app nay amal jI! :k:
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
gr8 work:k:
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thanx 4 sharin
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
*meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
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B E A U T I F U L !
system
July 23, 2005, 9:48pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
*Woh kehney lagi aaj lagta hai har taara sog'waar
Jaisey chaandni aur chaand ki yeh raat aakhri hai
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As usual.. another wonderful piece of poetry... thank you for sharing :-)
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
Mashallah.. Very Nice AMAL… Beautiful as Usual
Amal
July 24, 2005, 2:18pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
Koyal:
beautiful Amal :k:
Thanx
CC thanx for liking it. And nice to see you again
GtG , thanx for the guest appearance :~)
umer.ashraf, show_sha, Jaan Lewaa, HeArT HaCKeR, KhamoshNigahein and GS, ghazal pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya So nice of you
La_iba
July 24, 2005, 4:10pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
Sad:(...but Beautiful!!!
AQ
July 24, 2005, 6:01pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
As always as beautiful as it ought to be :)
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
very deep
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
kuch yaad dilaa diYaa dost :-)
Dilsay
July 26, 2005, 12:08pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
Bohat khoob kiya baat hai... Khush rahooo
nakhan
July 26, 2005, 4:33pm
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
maza aa gaya parh kar :k:
main nay abhi nai nai join ki hay ye mefil
aur ab afsoos ho raha hay k itni dair say
kiyoon pata chala..
i really enjoing it.
the best one
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog’waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
very very nice..
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
beautiful
reet
October 9, 2005, 4:59am
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Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
bahot hi khoobsurat hai........Amal
Re: Hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
wow yaar Amal mashaAllah very beautiful poem