Hum done ke darmiyaaN ye ajab faaslaa raha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Shaayad aap log mujhe bhool bhi gaye hon ab tak..phir bhee kuchh jazbaat le kar aaya hoon…aap logon ke comments ka intezaar rahega..

Hum done ke darmiyaaN ye ajab faaslaa raha
MaiN ooske kareeb rah ke bhee oos se juda raha

Saahil pe jiski doobi hazarooN kashtiyaaN thii
Wo hi shaksh tamaam umra mera nakhuda raha

Waqt-e-rukhsat sar jhuka ke wo yun gaya ke maiN
Bahot door talak safar meiN oose soNchta raha

Apne aks meiN bhee na maiN khud ko paa sakaa
kis ko na jaane Aaj tak maiN dhooNDhata raha

jab aaNkh khuli tha door tak tanhaaeyoN ka khauff
bas khawaab hi meiN zindagee se waasta raha

manzil pe muR kar dekhaa to The raaste udaas
jaane kis kii justajoo meiN ab tak bhaagtaa raha

merii hi tarah tanhaa Thaa aasmaaN pe Chaand
kal shab oosii ke saath meiN bhii jaagtaa raha

maiN chaahta Tha oosko apnii jaaN se bhii ziyaada
esi baat pe wo shaayad mujhse badgumaaN raha

bas kambakhat Tha ‘ ’, par aadmii bura nahiN
wo kisii aur ke naseeb kii sazaa kaaTthaa raha

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bahut khub bhai! :k:
post karte raha kijiye taake koi bhoole na! :slight_smile: kher time hi kahan hota hai aaj kal.

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Pramod jee hum aap ko kaise bhool sakty haiN… aap to hamary dil maiN rehty ho… :slight_smile:

very nice post today… :k:

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excellent bhai...
aap ki apni hai tu even more excellent

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very very nice pramod gi :)

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Re: Hum done ke darmiyaaN ye ajab faaslaa raha

Bohat khoob Pramod

… we still remember you though you left us long ago :frowning:

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Re: Hum done ke darmiyaaN ye ajab faaslaa raha

v nice and welcome back…btw ap hamari post per sher likhtey likhtey kahan bagh gaye thay ..ab us post per dobara likhin sher…i guess ab tu more tha 100 ho gaye…btw ap thay kahan?

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It's beautiful.

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Shukriya Saahil,ASA and Saby.

App logoN kp pasand aayee to shaayad maine kuchh theek hi likh diya hoga.

Thanks once again.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
very very nice pramod gi :)
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Shukriya CHAAND ji.

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Re: Re: Hum done ke darmiyaaN ye ajab faaslaa raha

Hi Amal,

your note of appriciation will really help me for a long in this field. I have learned a lot from your comments and posts.

Thanks once again.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

v nice and welcome back...btw ap hamari post per sher likhtey likhtey kahan bagh gaye thay ..ab us post per dobara likhin sher...i guess ab tu more tha 100 ho gaye......btw ap thay kahan?
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Nikami Bahna,

Aap ne hamein aaj bhi yaad rakha hua hai..ye hi bohot hai hamaare liye. Main tha kahan ?
eska jawaab aap ke signature se hi deta hoon

Kisi be’wafaa ki yaadeiN kisi dil’ruba ke parcheY
bhala aur kya miley ga ab kisi ko mereY ghar seY~

I missed u all a lot during this period.

Thanks for your appriciation on my creation.

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jab aaNkh khuli tha door tak tanhaaeyoN ka khauff
bas khawaab hi meiN zindagee se waasta raha

merii hi tarah tanhaa Thaa aasmaaN pe Chaand
kal shab oosii ke saath meiN bhii jaagtaa raha

bohat khoob ! :)

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Buhat khoob :k:

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ghazal pasand karne ke liye Shukriya Kashish and Sunnyboy.

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Buhat Umdah Pramod Jii keep it up :~)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Nikami Bahna,

Aap ne hamein aaj bhi yaad rakha hua hai..ye hi bohot hai hamaare liye. Main tha kahan ?
eska jawaab aap ke signature se hi deta hoon

Kisi be’wafaa ki yaadeiN kisi dil’ruba ke parcheY
bhala aur kya miley ga ab kisi ko mereY ghar seY~

I missed u all a lot during this period.

Thanks for your appriciation on my creation.
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u were missing me is leay hum ne ap k leay sher tayar rakha k ap ko jaawab dainay main asani ho hamin ..:)

achi chez tu achi lagay ghi na

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I must say great try :)

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Thanks Gul-e-Tasbeeh and TaNhAyAaN for your apprication.

Shukriya Nikami Bahna ..for your understanding.

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merey barey main baat ho rahi hia??