can someone tell me is it complete or not?
Aagahi ik dard hai, azaab hai, qabl is ke
Kitne pagal the hum kitabo.n me phool rakhte the
Poocha us ne kaisa tha hijr ka mausam
Kaha, rooh apni jaise kaanto.n pe rakhte the
Wo piyasa tha izhaar-e-shouq ka magar
Hum mohabbato per pakizgi ka ghilaaf rakhte the
Us ne poocha hi nahi kabhi udaasi ka sabab ,logo!
Warna hum bhi moo.n me zaban rakhte the
Tark-e-taluk ke us ne bahane dhoond liye, yaro!
Warna hum bhi husn-e-bemisaal rakhte the
Us ne kabhi haal bhi na jana, logo!
Hum jis ke liye zindagi apni daan rakhte the
Gila kis se karei.n, kiou huay reza reza
Hum to apne under hi ishq ka toofan rakhte the
Ishq-e-lazawaal ne jab taaqat bakhsi thi
Apni thoukar me sara jahan rakhte the
Jab bhi dekha us ko bhut duur se dekha
Nighahou.n me pakizgi, dil me Quran rakhte the
Jab aankho.n me barsaat ke mausam theherta tha
Hum chehre pe khushi ka samaa.n rakhte the
Yaha.n sab lafzou.n ke mohtaaj aur hum pagal
Khamoshi ki zaban pe aiteqaad rakhte the
Loota kisi ki sheeri.n guftari ne hum ko
Hum apne nazdeek her aik ko sadiq jo rakhte the
Na pooch is se ziyada ke ab himmat nahi hai aur
Kiya batlaye.n tujhe ke kiya kiya armaan rakhte the
if i am suppose to comment... i dont know it is complete or not but that is master piece.....
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
if i am suppose to comment... i dont know it is complete or not but that is master piece.....
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i didn't say not to reply to my topic.did i?
btw thanks for ur comments:~)
khoob........... our complete hai ya uncomplete wht can i say ?
beautiful :)
Its beautiful GKK :k:
:k: nicee
Even if its not complete. Its still a good one :k:
Re: Hum apne under Ishq ka toofan rakhte the
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH 
buhat khoob :k: thanks for sharing
i think this is complete sab kuch tu keh diya hai likhne wale ne :k:
Just Great!!! 
bohut khoob jee
^^ thanks a lot everyone:flower1:
and umar stop crying:bailan:
“Rooh apni jaisay kantoon pay rakhtay thay”
Beautiful, wonderful. Its so good.
thanx for sharing.
:k: :k: keep it up
lo ye kiya baat hui ek tu mien ro raha hoo.n aur upper se aap Bailan
piyar se samjhao na 
Hum bhi Bauhat Kuch rakhtay thay,,, Magar Janay do,, kabhi waqt mila to batayengay ;)
waisay,, Bauhat KHOOOB :K:
tauseef ----------thanks a lot:flower1:
umar------------ayein moft mein:hoonh:
aur waise bhi aaj kal piyar galion mein para tohre milta hai:nahnah:
arfin--------first of all what does ur name mean:hoonh:
and second did i ask u to tell me :halo:
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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
umar------------ayein moft mein:hoonh:
aur waise bhi aaj kal piyar galion mein para tohre milta hai:nahnah:
tu phir mujhe
^^:hug: