hui thee unsay mulakaat aik zamana hua!!!

** Hui thee un say mulakaat aik zamana hua
phir iskay baad kabhi aisa hadsa na hua

wajood ehal-e -wafa ka bahut ghanimaat hai
hamaray baad koi doosara hua na hua

main ji rahi hoon bazahir ba amar -e-majboori
bichar kay tujh sey meray dil kay saath kia na hua

nawazish -e- karam chara gar uthata kaun
mila woh dard jo mannat-e-kash-e-dawa na hua

tamam lutf-o-innayaat theey woh magar aye lamhay
koi hosala arz -e- muda na hua!!!

Lamhay!!**

wow, zabrdast Lamhay :k:

thanks pakistan zinda baad ji!!

Lamhay
Ap ki shaeri parh kar yun lagta hai jaise ek nau-umer larki chiraag haath mein le kar hawa ke ro-baru khari hai... Guriya ke haath nele par chuke hain, magar us ki aankhoon mein chamak maujood hai phool hain ke patti patti aur titleyaan hain ke rang barang khud ko sametay huwe hain... lekin khushboo hai ke phailti chali ja rahi hai aur rang hai ke hawaas per chaata ja raha hai...

Khuda kare ke aap ki shaaeri ka yeh mausam roz baroz nikharta jaye aur daaemi ban jaaye...

Ameen

Beautiful…:flower1:

:k: bohat achay :slight_smile:

bohut khoob lamhay appi:k::k:

nice one lamhay sis..:)

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**Lamhay
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Ap ki shaeri parh kar yun lagta hai jaise ek nau-umer larki chiraag haath mein le kar hawa ke ro-baru khari hai... Guriya ke haath nele par chuke hain, magar us ki aankhoon mein chamak maujood hai phool hain ke patti patti aur titleyaan hain ke rang barang khud ko sametay huwe hain... lekin khushboo hai ke phailti chali ja rahi hai aur rang hai ke hawaas per chaata ja raha hai...

Khuda kare ke aap ki shaaeri ka yeh mausam roz baroz nikharta jaye aur daaemi ban jaaye...

Ameen
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ap nay jo kuch likha usko parh kar aik zamana yaad agaya woh chiragh tu kab ka bhujh chuka haan par umeed ki kiran roshan hai aur roshan rahay gi taumar!!
kafi achi bataien bhi keh jatay hain aap!

thanks AB!

thanks paglee, Ck, MQand HH!

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *

ap nay jo kuch likha usko parh kar aik zamana yaad agaya woh chiragh tu kab ka bhujh chuka haan par umeed ki kiran roshan hai aur roshan rahay gi taumar!!
kafi achi bataien bhi keh jatay hain aap!

thanks AB!
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Lamhay ji chiraag tu jalta hi hai kuch deir ke leye, aur bil-aakhir bujh jaaya karta hai... btw thanks for your every word Lamhay ... God bless ya !

:k: :flower1:

:konfused:

kuch chiragh tamam umar bhi roshan reh jatay hain agar neeyat sachi hoo tu…!

thanks Khamosh nigahien!

mashAllah urdu lughut chahyy jeee:mudhosh:
wasey mazak kay ilawa lamhyy its soo nice and beautiful effort no doubt
keep it up:k: