In dewaroen sai, in weranoon sai
Ji gabratah hai
In afsanoon sai, in pachtawoon sai
Ji gabratah hai
Na bahar jahoin, na andar aoin
Bohaat ji gabratah hai
In darwazoon sai, anjani rahoon sai
Ji gabratah hai
In kabrestanoin sai, warainain insanoon sai
Ji gabratah hai
Hhar din sojhtai rahtein hoon
kai kyon sakoon na ata hai
Na chane-dil ata hai na wo ata hai
Bus ji gabratah hai
this is my first urdu poem..corrections are welcome..or if anyone wanna explain how towrite stanzas in urdu poetry, types of poems and stuff im willing to learn
Una ap ki post main ap ka ji zayeda nahin ghabrata hai and u repeat this many times
If its like that
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Ji ghabrata hai
In dewaroon say jo Khamoosh hain
in veraniyoon say jo meray ander hain Haayel!
In afsanoon say jo teri meri ruswaye na ban jaye , in pachtawoon say
jo mujhey ander hi ander mar dalay!
In darwazoon say, anjani rahoon say
Jo janay mujh ko kahan lay jarahi hain
In kabrustano say, ajnabi insanoo sey
Ji gabrata hai
haar din sochti rehti hoon
kyon sukoon nahi ata hai
Haar paal ki beyqarari rehti hai
Na chain- e-dil ata hai na wo ata hai
Bus ji gabrata hai...!**
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