howa tamam, jo umr say pehlay...

poochtay ho shoq-e-gharq-e-ulfat hay kya?
jaltay tumnay dekhay naheen parwanay kya?

dekh doob kar kabhee sa’at-e-intazar main
phool, khushboo, jaam-e-nigah-e-yaar kya!

rehta hay sresham magan deedaar main uskay
tarpay na jis kay wastay, wo deedar-e-yar kya

mana bohot thay ratjagay yaad main uski magar
howa tamam, jo umr say pehlay, wo intazar kya

nice…:k:

Re: howa tamam, jo umr say pehlay…

Loved it. Above shair in perticular.

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:bravo:

superb :k:

thnx everyone :slight_smile:

JonyBr kab aarahay ho phir :wink:

Nice work :k:

Re: howa tamam, jo umr say pehlay…

Kia kahney :k:

mae ne ye thread kion nahi dekhii :smack2: :bummer:

*mana bohot thay ratjagay yaad main uski magar
howa tamam, jo umr say pehlay, wo intazar kya *
beautiful..:k::k:

zabar10 hai ghazal ik dum..:biggthumb

keep it up :flower1:

Shikra, Seedha Saada and HeArT HaCKeR: shukran shukran :p

beautifully written :)
the last shair is awesome...

Bahut Khoob Janab :k:

thanx for sharing

thnx evy1 :)

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