hoping for u to come & stay

[Capricorn]

& then the rain touched me,
as u touched my naked soul…
deep and lasting.

the rainbow appeared
like the smile you bring on my heart…
soft and pleasing.

and then the other day i heard
no, wait;
i listened
to your sweet voice
fading away somewhere in the eternity.

then i saw
no, i think i looked
at your image
wandering away in to the horizon.

you wud call me from there
i expected
no, wait;
this is wot i hoped
but u were too busy
you didnt hear or come

and i kept listening, looking
hoping for u to come & stay …

---

By,

[larki_punjaban]

aww, that is so sweet and so sad :k:

[Capricorn]

*Originally posted by larki_punjaban: *
aww, that is so sweet and so sad :k:

Sweet and sad? It can be either!

[system]

Re: hoping for u to come & stay

*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
& then the rain touched me,
as u touched my naked soul…
deep and lasting.

the rainbow appeared
like the smile you bring on my heart…
soft and pleasing.

and then the other day i heard
no, wait;
i listened
to your sweet voice
fading away somewhere in the eternity.

then i saw
no, i think i looked
at your image
wandering away in to the horizon.

you wud call me from there
i expected
no, wait;
this is wot i hoped
but u were too busy
you didnt hear or come

and i kept listening, looking
hoping for u to come & stay …

---

By,

Hmmm… nice

[Capricorn]

Re: Re: hoping for u to come & stay

*Originally posted by KhamoshNigahein: *

Hmmm… nice

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

nice1:k:

[Philanthrope]

Lovely!

[Capricorn]

Thanks GKK and Philanthrope :k:

[Prince_Ali]

:k: