hope u guys like it

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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i am really confuse right now while i am posting this topic because this one is my first topic and may be last if u guys dont like it.hope u’ll.
:halo:

                       EVERY TIME I SEE TOU PASS

Every time i see you pass by me
i see my life going by every time
i see u pass by me
the sparkle of ur eyes
the sound of ur voice
and the smile u have
just make me want to be the wind that touches you
and the rain that wash ur face
AND ME…
jealous of everything that
gets to touch you so my
voice goes with the wind
to touch your face to say
I LOVE YOU…

i wish that u guys like it.
:rolleyes:

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niceeeeee:k:

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:slight_smile:
thank u very much jaan lewaa
v happy that there is someone to encoourage me:biggrin:
but one thing i can’t understand is that do i keep posting or this one is enough

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
but one thing i can't understand is that do i keep posting or this one is enough
[/QUOTE]

Your contribution is really great and YES, please continue sharing more with us... :)

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Re: hope u guys like it

Beautiful…It reminded me of some one prima facie…kuch yaadein laut aayeen kuch baatein yaad aane lageen..kisee ka hansna, muskurana…Thanks ghazal :k:

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hi everyone:)
thank u very much u guys:flower1:
and i’ll keep posting
once again thanks a lot for encourage me:)

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:slight_smile: welcome to GS :):wave:

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thanks niki:)