Homeward Bound

Homeward Bound

The Calling..

It was an average day in June of 1998 and once again the weather was cloudy with the threat of rain looming over the horizon. The weather had been like this for a few weeks now and as the days passed bye, hopes for a hot summer were gradually fading away.

I had been suffering from slight depression for the past month or so and it seemed to be getting worse. A cloud was looming over my head and I struggled hard to find the source of this depression. At home I had become quite and distant, I had lost my appetite and had become somewhat of a recluse. My working life was also suffering with most of my days being spent starring blankly at the computer screen for hours on end. Looking out of the office window I saw a grey world under a grey sky, sad, empty faces drifting aimlessly in an uncaring world. I was slipping deeper into depression and the remedy was still nowhere to be found.

The days drifted by and July was soon upon us. After weeks on end of miserable weather, the clouds finally broke and blue skies came with the promise of warmer days ahead. Over the course of a few days, the weather improved dramatically. Once again the air was filled with the melodious songs of birds, and life suddenly picked up its pace. The once empty streets were now busy with the hustle bustle of life and the large array of steps leading to the city cathedral were littered with people having their lunch and making the most of the warm radiant sun. The change in weather did very little, if anything at all to lift my spirits and no matter how hard I tried, I could not share in everyone’s enthusiasm for the arrival of the long awaited summer.

We had a small radio in the Office, which was usually playing in a low volume in the background. It was there to fill any awkward periods of silence and also to add a little ‘noise’ in the office. It was lunchtime and my colleagues had both disappeared out of the office. With no one in the office I turned up the volume on the radio, and then sat back wondering what to do about this depression I was in. It was then that something on the radio caught my attention, it was a very mellow tune, mostly violins and a slow drum beat. However the more I listened to it, the more enticed I became. Suddenly everything else in the room faded away, all my thoughts and energies were directed towards this song !. It reminded me of something, something from my past, but what was it ??… my mind raced and a million images were recalled from the depths of my memory as I struggled to find a connection between this song and the feelings which engulfed me. Then all of a sudden one single image froze in my mind, it hit me like a sledge hammer, completely numbing all my sensations and I sat there motionless..

The image was of a road in Pakistan. It was the only tarmac road to pass by our remote village and thus was the road which lead to all destinations. All journeys to the near by towns and villages began from this road. It stretched roughly from north to south and the land being fairly flat, you could see about 1.5 to 2 miles in either direction. To the East, there were a number of fields, usually planted with corn or wheat and a small dusty path snaking its way through them leading to the village. Looking over the road to the west, were a greater number of fields on a slight downhill gradient eventually leading to a small ravine. Across the ravine, the land rose once again and a few houses on the outskirts of the next village could be seen off in the distance.

I found myself totally immersed in this vision of back home and noticed that all my worries and concerns had melted away. The depression, which was looming over me like a dark cloud was whisked away and I felt that a burden of a lifetime had been lifted off my shoulders. The song on the radio ended and the talk of the radio hosts snatched me out of this serene vision. I just managed to hear the radio host mention the Artist and song title… it was by a group called Catatonia and the song was titled ‘Dead from the Waist down’.

It was then that I realised the source of my depression and also the cure. It had been a very long time since I last felt this way, which was probably the main reason why it took me so long to realise what I was suffering from. I was homesick !, the emptiness and pain I felt within me was a longing to go home, to visit the land where I was born, to see my grandparents again and all the other relatives I left behind so many years ago. To have finally found the source of my depression, suddenly filled me with joy and sadness at the same time and I felt tears well up in my eyes. Before I knew it, tears were trickling down my cheeks like raindrops on a window and the need to go back home was growing stronger within me. Luckily the office was still empty and I quickly dried my tears, if someone had seen me, there would have been a lot of explaining to do !.

I knew what had to be done.. It was time to plan a trip to Pakistan, my homeland was calling me…

To be continued…


~~ I have a dream… But I can’t tell you about it ! ~~

[This message has been edited by Arch-Angel (edited February 28, 2001).]

I FEEL LIKE THAT ALL THE TIME

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Only i don’t have a ‘Pakistan’ where i can go and get my head straightened

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Can’t wait to see what happens …

Very impressive writing. Keep the spirits up. I like the script...but then again I am crazy about Pakistan.

Thanks for the support guys !.. It's a very long story and it will probably take quite a number of long posts (just like the first one!) to complete. I will post the next 'chapter' as soon as it is ready.

If anyone has any advice or tips on how I could improve my writing technique, please feel free to let me know.. otherwise.. watch this space for the next installment and hope you enjoy reading the whole story as much as I enjoy writing it.


~~ I have a dream.... But I can't tell you about it ! ~~

The Plan.

Having decided that I have to go to Pakistan, I then set about carefully planning the intricacies of the whole trip, when would I go ?, how long should I stay in Pakistan ?, Do I go alone or should I take someone with me? Can I finance the trip ??.. All these and many more questions needed answering if I was to make this trip happen.

I decided that I needed at least 6 weeks in Pakistan to make it worth while. It had been a very long time since I was last there and I knew that at least a week and a half would be taken up by visits from relatives. So 6 weeks would be sufficient enough to cover time spent ‘around the house’ and also cover actual travel/sight seeing time. The only problem was that I only had 4 weeks of Annual leave from my job. Luckily I had been in my current job for about 2 years and had obviously made quite an impression since my superiors did not put up much resistance in granting me 4 weeks annual leave and 2 weeks unpaid leave all in one block. Much to my relief I had enough money in the bank to finance the trip and now simply had to decide on whether or not to go alone and to set a date to book the tickets by.

After careful consideration, I decided that it would not be worth experiencing the wonders of Pakistan unless I had someone to share those experiences with. The first person who came to mind was my younger (and only) brother. He was 17 at the time and although we were on reasonable terms with each other, over the past few years we had grown somewhat distant and a trip to Pakistan together seemed like the perfect opportunity to strengthen our brotherly bonds. He had been to Pakistan previously but that was about 10 years ago and when it comes to Pakistan, a lot can change in 10 years !. He was also at an age when he would most likely remember the people he was introduced to (both friends and family) and hopefully all the travelling I had in mind would help to increase his love for Pakistan. The only problems I could foresee with this plan were that maybe he would not share my enthusiasm about visiting Pakistan and also whether or not he’ll be able (or willing) to finance his part of the trip.

So one day after work I went over to my parents house and while the whole family was gathered there, I informed them of my plan. I only wish that I had a camera at the time to capture the moment when I mentioned that I was intending to take my brother along with me… his eyes lit up like a thousand stars ! and he spent the rest of the night dancing around like a 3 year old at Christmas !.

Having worked out all the finances, we now had to get the air tickets booked in a hurry. During this time of the year, finding suitable dates to fly to and from Pakistan was difficult since all the school and college students used their summer vacations to visit relatives back home. After much running around, we finally managed to get hold of some dates, which enabled us to spend about 6 weeks in Pakistan and also return in time for my brother to start his new term at college. We were to fly out during the last week of July and fly back et the end of the first week in September. It was now the second week in July and all we could do is wait…

At last !.. the day finally arrived for us to head off to the airport and fly to Pakistan. It was a Sunday and the sun gleamed in a bright blue sky. All the trees and flowers were in full bloom and the air was scented with a multitude of sweet aromas. We had been awake since the early hours, partially due to the excitement and also the fact that we had many friends and family members visiting with various gifts for loved ones back home but mostly just letters and greeting cards.

The hours passed by and I really didn’t pay much attention to the happenings around me. I was already engulfed with the memories of back home, wondering how much had changed since my last visit and looking forward to catching up with old friends. Indeed I imagined that much would have changed. Many of my friends were now married and some even had two or three children. But along with the happiness of new additions to family and friends, there was also the sorrow of loved ones who had passed away. The excitement was building up within me like a balloon and only wished that I could close my eyes and upon opening them, find myself in Pakistan.

The sound of a horn, abruptly brought me back to the present. The hired mini bus had arrived and it was time to say our goodbyes and head off. The suitcases had been packed in the back of the minibus and both myself and my brother, made our way out of the front door. Outside we said our goodbyes to various friends and family and then jumped into the minibus. Both my parents and all three of my sisters insisted on accompanying us to the airport. It was the first time that both my brother and I would be away from the family for such a long time and I’m sure the emptiness in the house would be very noticeable, so they wanted to spend as much time with us as they possibly could.

At the airport, we booked in our luggage and obtained the boarding cards. Now it was just a case of waiting to board the plane when the time came. This seemed to be the ideal time for my mother to give my younger brother a pep talk !. She went through the usual routine of ‘Always listen to your older brother… never go off with someone you don’t know.. don’t blow your money on useless items… always be nice and polite to your elders.. etc..’. I don’t know whether he was listening intently or was day dreaming !… but he seemed to acknowledge her with the occasional nod and she was happy that what was being said was actually being heard !.

The time came for us to board the plane. We all hugged each other and although I could see tears well up in my mothers eyes, she managed to hold them back. Dad simply said ‘look after your younger brother and have a nice trip’, he was never the emotional one !. but everyone seemed happy and mum blessed us on a safe a happy journey. We both walked into the lobby where boarding was taking place and turned around for one final ‘good bye’ wave. We boarded the plane, found our seats, placed the hand luggage in the over-head compartment and finally sat down. It took about 30 minutes for everyone to board the plane and as we taxied to the run way, my mind began wondering of the adventure that lay ahead !….

To be continued..


~~ I have a dream.... But I can't tell you about it ! ~~

ps.. appologies if this is getting a bit long !. its just that I feel I must write down all the feelings and emotions I felt in order to convey what this trip meant to me. And also hopefully use the opportunity to improve my writing skills !... appologies if anyone is getting bored !.


~~ I have a dream.... But I can't tell you about it ! ~~

Again, Very well writen but i do have some creative criticisms this time.

I think the piece was perfect for posting on Gupshup but in all honesty i don't think that u could get it published as u write in 2 much detail. An author needs to know when and where description is needed. U also need to look at ur audience - do they want to read about people sending gifts over to Pakistan ???? - has this got anything to do with the storyline ????? Personally, i feel as though it reads too much like a diary of persoanl events. Besides that, its pretty damn good. Well done and keep writing !!!

Sobi.

Thanks for the advice Sobi

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and I agree with your observation. However, it does get difficult at times when deciding on what to include in the text and what to omit, where details are required and when they can be left out. But I think a lot of that comes with experience and practice !.. Hopefully the next chapter will be a bit more descriptive and a better read since it’s mostly based in Pakistan !

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~~ I have a dream… But I can’t tell you about it ! ~~