Sometimes some poems (Ghazal / Nazm) get quite popular and we don’t find anything extraordinary in that poem.
Have you come across such poems?
Share Please… I start with this one posted last week in Poetry forum (though its not that popular, but it got likes and criticism as well)
Wo larki shayad pagal thi,
Din raat hi gumsum rehti thi,
Kuch sharm-o-haya ka paikar thi,
Kuch narm mizaj rakhti thi,
Ankhon mai neem nasha sa tha,
Baaton sy dewani lagti thi,
Humraz na tha uska koi,
Bass khuda sy baatein karti thi,
Ik shaam ke anchal mai aksar,
Jazbat chupaye rakhti thi,
Darti thy juda ho janey se,
Ya pyar se shayad darti thi,
Kya sabar tha us dewani ka,
Kya zabt-e-mohabat rakhti thi,
Hai rashk mujhy us pagal pe,
Kya khoob mohabat karti thi,
Wo larki shayad pagal thi,
Kya khoob mohabat karti thi..
I know kisi ne dukhi dil se likhi hai but still is mein kuch khas batt nhi
Main cigarette ko hatheli per ulat kr khaali krta hn,
Phir us mein daal kr yadein tumhari khoob malta hun,
Zara sa ghum milata hun,Hatheli ko ghumaata hun,
Basa kr tujh ko saanson mein,
Main phir cigarette bnata hun,
Laga kr tujh ko apnay honton se,
Mohabbat se jalata hun,
Tujhy sulga k cigartte mein,
Main teray kassh lgata hun,
Dhuwan jab meray honton se nikal kr raqs krta hai,
Meray charon taraf kamray mein tera aqs bnta hai,
Main us se batein krta hun,Woh mujh se batein krta hai,
Yeh lamha bat krnay ka bra anmol hota hai,
Teri yadein,teri batein..
Bara mahol hota hai…
