koiDost
February 10, 2005, 3:47pm
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aadaab, dosto!
ek haaliya Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. mulaahiza farmaaiye aur bataaiye ki kaisii lagii.
**Ghazal
hisaar-e-zaat se gar ham nikal nahiiN sakte
hai inqilaab-e-zamaanaa kaa Khvaab be.maanii
khulii fazaa kii zaruurat jinheN ho vo paude
unhiiN kii raah meN patthar bichhaaye hai dunyaa
Ghubaar-e-raah kaa saa hashr un kaa hotaa hai
vo ban ke zahr dil-o-jaaN meN phail jaate haiN
kayii to dafn hii rahte haiN dil meN, ai :Waseem:
Waseem Ahmed**
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
Boht Khoob dost jee..:k::k:
Keep it up flowers
koiDost
February 10, 2005, 7:43pm
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
ap kii daad se to hameshaa hii Khushii hotii hai :), so is baar bhii huii. bahut bahut shukriya!
system
February 10, 2005, 8:51pm
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
koiDost:
**Ghubaar-e-raah kaa saa hashr un kaa hotaa hai **
**vo ban ke zahr dil-o-jaaN meN phail jaate haiN **
**kayii to dafn hii rahte haiN dil meN, ai :Waseem: **ki saare dard to sheroN meN Dhal nahiiN sakte!!!
Waseem Ahmed
Very nice… You’re poems are always so well-balanced
Great work… !!!
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
bahut achha likha…kep sharing :k:
AQ
February 11, 2005, 3:09am
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se...
Every sher is better than other and beautiful in it's balance.
A nice poem. Some great facts and some great thoughts. Once again you've done it again Waseem :)
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
koiDost:
**Ghazal
hisaar-e-zaat se gar ham nikal nahiiN sakte
hai inqilaab-e-zamaanaa kaa Khvaab be.maanii
khulii fazaa kii zaruurat jinheN ho vo paude
unhiiN kii raah meN patthar bichhaaye hai dunyaa
Ghubaar-e-raah kaa saa hashr un kaa hotaa hai
vo ban ke zahr dil-o-jaaN meN phail jaate haiN
kayii to dafn hii rahte haiN dil meN, ai :Waseem:
Waseem Ahmed**
Wah Zabardast Ghazal, buhat munfrid sii hay, i like it v much…thanks for sharing:-)
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
Zabardast Waseem… As Usual… Very Nice
BTW .. HO kahaaN? U r Total Time Ghayab… Bzy ho I think…
Amal
February 13, 2005, 8:36pm
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
koiDost:
aadaab, dosto!
hisaar-e-zaat se gar ham nikal nahiiN sakte
hai inqilaab-e-zamaanaa kaa Khvaab be.maanii
khulii fazaa kii zaruurat jinheN ho vo paude
vo ban ke zahr dil-o-jaaN meN phail jaate haiN
kayii to dafn hii rahte haiN dil meN, ai :Waseem:
Waseem Ahmed**
Indeed a beautifull ghazal koiDost :k:…thanx for sharing with us
koiDost
February 16, 2005, 4:32pm
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se...
KhamoshNigahein,show_sha,Anwaar Bhai,GuL-e-Tasbeeh,Qamar SB and Amal SB mujhe behad Khushii hai ki ye adnaa koshish aap sab ne pasand farmaayii. shukriya!
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
Waseem Dear… Meray naam ke saath… Se.. SB waghera Matt lagaya karo.. Belive me.. HAZAM naheeN hota
Chalo.. Kam hi sahi.. but.. aatay raha karo…
Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
koiDost:
aadaab, dosto!
ek haaliya Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. mulaahiza farmaaiye aur bataaiye ki kaisii lagii.
**Ghazal **
**hisaar-e-zaat se gar ham nikal nahiiN sakte **
**hai inqilaab-e-zamaanaa kaa Khvaab be.maanii **
**khulii fazaa kii zaruurat jinheN ho vo paude **
**unhiiN kii raah meN patthar bichhaaye hai dunyaa **
**Ghubaar-e-raah kaa saa hashr un kaa hotaa hai **
**vo ban ke zahr dil-o-jaaN meN phail jaate haiN **
**kayii to dafn hii rahte haiN dil meN, ai :Waseem: **ki saare dard to sheroN meN Dhal nahiiN sakte!!!
Waseem Ahmed
Khobsoorat kheyal kay sath buhat khobsorat ghazal he
koiDost
February 25, 2005, 7:31am
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Re: hisaar-e-zaat se…
Rameesha Jee Ghazal pasand farmaane kaa bahut bahut shukriya!
and thanks for sharin flowers
Apna naam.. AJNABI sa lagta hay …