Himat E iltaja

Himat e iltaja bhi kyonkar ho
Ek tooti sada bhi kyonkar ho
Raaste jab juda juda hojayen
Ansuon mai gila bhi kyonkar ho
Pasdaari e maseehayi ka
Dawa e be waja bhi kyonkar ho
Mehram e gham ko charagar bhi kahe
Dil se itni khata bhi kyonkar ho
Abla pa musafaton ka naseeb
Aik bujhta diya bhi kyonkar ho
Shab ki tareekiyon ke dhalne mai
Subha ka tazkara bhi kyonkar ho
Jab tere dar ki justju na rahi
Zeest ka aasra bhi kyonkar ho

Re: Himat E iltaja

Very nice :)

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these poems that you are sharing here are very matured.. Masha Allah

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wah sahib... aap ki shaeiri ki kaya baat hai

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should i take it as a compliment?

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why should you not?

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thanks :)

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Awesome Tahreer................
parh kar lagta hai kisi ba kamal shair ka kalaam hai.......
keep sharing janab:)

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im not a bakamal one, even if i dare count myself among the list of poets... And im not a "basyaar-go" one too... so all poetry of mine could be counted no more than on finger tips.. your compliment is an asset :)

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wel janab ba kamal in a sense k ur poetry is flawless!

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yea i got that. The pleasure is mine if u take it that way :)

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Beautiful :)

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kya baat hey , buhat achi tehreer hey :-)

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thanks.

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Shab ki tareekiyon ke dhalne mai
Subha ka tazkara bhi kyonkar ho

bohat khoob. khobsuret ghazal. thanks for sharing :)

keep up the good word

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:)