salam all poets and poetesses of the poetry forum…
i need the complete ghazal to which this she’r belongs…
main jis ko tera andaaz-e-mohabbat samajh baitha hoon
woh tabassum woh takalum teri aadat hee na ho
plz ppl…
i need it…
help ur bro out here…
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Terey hoNtoN pe tabbasum ki wo halki si lakeer
merey takhaiyul meiN reh reh ke jhalak utthti hey
yuN achaanak terey aariz ka khayaal aata hey
jesey zulmat meiN koi shama bharrak utthti hey
Terey peirhan-e-rangeeN ki janooN-kheiz mehak
khaab ban ban kar merey zehan meiN lehrati hey
raat ki sard khamoshi meiN har ik jhoNke sey
terey infaas, terey jism ki aaNch aati hey
MeiN sulagtey huwey raazoN ko ayaaN to kar dooN
lekin in raazoN ki tash'heer sey ji darta hey
raat ke khaab, ujaaley meiN bayaaN to kar dooN
in haseeN khaaboN ki taabeer sey ji darta hey
Teri saaNsoN ki thakan teri nigaahoN ka sakoot
dar-haqeeqat koi rangeen sharraarat hi na ho
meiN jisey pyaar ka andaaz samajh beittha hooN
wo tabbasum wo takkallum teri aadat hi na ho
Soochta hooN ke tujhey mil ke jis soch meiN hooN
pehley us soch ka mafhoom samajh looN to kahooN
meiN terey shehar meiN anjaan hooN, pardesi hooN
terey altaaf ka mafhoom samajh looN to kahooN
KaheeN aesa na ho paaoN merey tharra jaeiN
aur teri marmari baahoN ka sahaara na miley
ashk behtey reheiN khaamosh, sia raatoN meiN
aur terey reshmi aaNchal ka kinaara na miley!
By: Sahir Ludhyanvi
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...
wowww nice poem!!!
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thanks amal helping aur sharing donon kae liyae
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Gham aur khushiyan hamain Khuda kae aur nazdeek ker daeti hain, hamain is baat ka yaqeen ho jata hai kae hamarae liyae jo rasta Khudawand kareem nae banaya hai, hamain sirif usi pae chalna hai aur ham apni merzi sae aik kadam idhar sae udhar nahin ker saktae.
“I hate the way you’re always right, I hate it when
you lie. I hate it
when you make me laugh, even worse when you make me
cry. I hate it when you’re not around and the fact
that you didn’t call, but mostly I hate
the way I don’t hate you…not even close,not even a
little bit, not
even at all.”
I also want to thank Amal for sharing this ghazal with us. It is tooooooo good!
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Especially the last sher.
I was very impressed. But what does the word “Haraas” mean, if anyone could help me?
~ Sehra ki tarha rehte hue thak gayin aankhen,
Dukh kehta hai ab mein koi darya bhi to dekhoon… (Parween Shakir)
~ Mehshar mein le gayi thi, tabiyat ki saadgi
Lekin bare khuloos se hum laut aaye hain…
[This message has been edited by Jaan-e-Ghazal (edited January 26, 2002).]
nice amal… veryy beautiful gazal…
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lafzoon ko itamad ka lahja bhi chahey
zikrey saher baja hay yaqeeney saher bhi chahaey
It’s my pleasure to share it with everyone here
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… but the real credit goes to armughal
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thanx anyway
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
J-e-G my mistake…asal meiN ye lafz heraas hey na-ke haraas … sorry
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ye lafz ziada-tar khaof ke saath istimaal
hota hey. Yani khaof-o-heraas. Aur jab khaof
ke bagheir istimaal hota hey to is ka wohi
matlab hota hey jo khaof ka hota hey. Aur
khaof ke ilawa heraas ka matlab na-umeedi
aur mayusi bhi hota hey…I hope it’s clear now
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
bohat hi khoob
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~
thanx a million…
amal u r the best
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its been a looooooooong time i’ve been searching for this poem…
and since i dont have any urdu library here where i live, net is my only source…
thanx again