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Allama Sahib ko kion Tang ker rahay hain …
Kuch meri Ferma’ish per ghaur karain 
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hmmm.. i will see if ‘aamad’ ayam yaa na aayam:D
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Khaab adhoorey sahi
khaab apney to heiN
dil meiN aaya jo bhi dil ney paaya sabhi
neend ke us taraf go ke kuch bhi nahi
jab haqeeqat ke rang raas aaey nahi
to hum ney socha chalo need ke saath hi
so roz chaltey rahey khaab buntey rahey
khuwaahisheiN khud-ba-khud haath aaney lageiN
khusbuweiN bin kahey saath aaney lageiN
jhil'milaatey huwey saarey taarey haseeiN
khud hi jholi meiN aa kar chamkney lagey
rang nazroN ki chaadar pe aesey charrhey
ke phool palkoN pe aa kar mehakney lagey
jo bhi dil ko laga humsafar ban gaya
na tarrapna koi na judaai koi
na zamaana koi na khudai koi
aaNkh agarchey khuli hatth maltey huwey
kuch hi pal ko sahi, hum khush to rahey
log haNstey heiN to unko haNs leney do
khaab adhoorey sahi,
khaab apney to heiN!
By: Amal
Thats Beautiful Masha Allah
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Sho'a'ra'aiy GS main aap ka koi Participation nazar nahin aai
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Insha Allah Aayam Aayam 
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ab hum hotay huvay bhee nazar naheeN aatay 
dhooNdho tau jaanaiN 
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Koi aur nick tau nahin 
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kaisay dost ho yaar:D itni si cheez naheeN dhooNdh sakay 
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Dhoond lia hay yaara…
Nai ruto~on ki chaNdni maiN
guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN
wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
badaltay rishtoN kay aNgun maiN
**chura kay daaman **
bacha kar nazraiN
jhaTak kar hathoN ko
wo naye rishtoN ko amar kar gaye
Nice idea … But again Gham ka Ta’asur ziaada hay
Traditional poetry attracts me more … Azad Sha’i’ri say main zara bhagta hoon …
Rythem is the thing that givs a unique tatse
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:)
I feel comfortable in azaad sha'iri... I am not a big shaair who can come up with balanced verses and appropriate diction accordingly.
I just write down what heart feels and whenever it feels... :)
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Aaj kal choon'K main kud bahaut khush hoon tau her jagah smiles he dhoond raha hoon:p
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malik bhai if u stay 10 minutes.. i might be able to give u something:p
something just "Aayam, Aayam" :D
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There is nothing wrong with the idea of Azad Sha’'i’ri … The ideas u come up with r really awsome… there is flow as well speacially in this piece of poetry..
Kharabi mujh main hay
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I m waiting Yaara G
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ThoRa sabar kar laina bhai:D
jaana naheeN:D
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Network Down nahin howa tau howa
main nahin janain wala
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check kar lo bhai:blush:
abhi aamad huvee thee
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assalamalaikum bhai...how r u doin??
and where were u?..hoz life been?
and i so need ur ' khush raho's '...:-(
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