Hello Dear Guppies( a quick note)

Dear Guppies,

I welcome all the poets (professional and budding) and also those who are not endowed with this gift but have the ability to comprehend and appreciate this form of art, to this forum. For the sake of convenience, we have divided the forum into two sub-foras. Intekhab is where you can post the works of your favorite poets (ghazals, nazams and asharas) that you want to share with the fellow guppies. Also make sure to acknowledge the poet, please. Shora-e-gupshup as is evident is for our resident poets. Please feel free to share your work with the rest of us and give us a chance to appreciate your skills.

As you all know that 14th of August is just around the corner, exactly twenty three days from today, so I thought of asking you guys for a little favor. First of all, for those who post in Intekhab, may I request you all to post ashars, nazams and ghazals of your favorite poets specifically pertaining to Independence Day or patriotism. Let’s say milli naghmaat written by famous poets.
Secondly, for our very own resident poets, here is a chance for you all to show your talents and if possible express your feelings towards your country in the form of poetry. So lets get started, shall we :slight_smile: ??? We will in the end pick up one best piece from the works of Shora-e-Gupshup and announce it on the 14th of August. How’s that?
Do let me know if you have any suggestions and I will try to accommodate them.

Warm Regards,

Minerva.

p.s: Even if you don’t see me around, make sure to write your suggestions in this thread and I will read and discuss them with the concerned authorities.

I’ll Try :k:

Here It Is

The Qoami Tarana :smooth:

Blessed be the sacred land,
Happy be the bounteous realm,
Symbol of high resolve,

Land of Pakistan.
Blessed be thou citadel of faith.

The Order of this Sacred Land
Is the might of the brotherhood of the people.
May the nation, the country, and the State
Shine in glory everlasting.
Blessed be the goal of our ambition.

This flag of the Crescent and the Star
Leads the way to progress and perfection,
Interpreter of our past, glory of our present,
Inspiration of our future,
Symbol of Almighty’s protection

:jhanda:

that has got to be the shortest quick note i've ever read :p

Thanks Bawaqoof :flower1:

Just one poem. Baqi poets kahan hain. Even if you are not a shair, you can always post one of your favourite nazam or ghazal or better still milli naghma in our intekhab forum.

should i Try???

Karachi Tera Husan Da paylaa
Lahore Hi Tera Dil Wala

Sawat , Muree , Kalam, ko kiya kaho
Woh tu hi Paristaan Hamra

I have these line's should i complete it .........Manager Sahiba;)?

Re: should i Try???

Woh That’s Great :k:

Plz Complete It :flower1:

complete

Karachi Tera Husan Da paylaa
Lahore Hi Tera Dil Wala

Sawat , Muree , Kalam, ko kiya kaho
Woh tu hi Paristaan Hamra

Pak Watan teri Pak Shaan
Tujhe pay Hi har dil qurban

Kero tera naam mai roshan
na janey ajj meray dil mai kiya hi Sahmaya

Sindh, Blochistan, Serhad, aur Punjab
ko mai kiya kaho yai tu hi 4 Baaz'oon teray!

Madhoshi-e-Alam hi aur ajeeb sa Tara'na!!

P A K I S T A N Z I N D A B A D

Bahie Bewaqoof i m not Poet, But phir bi I did try coz manager sahiba nay bola ta na try kernay ko ,

Thanks For encourging me to specially bewaqoof bahyia

Shukria aap donnon hazraat ka. :)

great.. thats exactly something I was looking for.. I remember couple of yrs ago, Amal and Rameesha had this thread started and it worked out soo fine.. there were some nice shair and ghazals that almost everbody shared.. I posted the request y'day to help me find that thread but I guess, no one was able to find it. Anywayz, I just feel like posting my all time fav, Ay Jazba-e Dil one more time. :-)

ay jazba-e-dil gar main chahuN har chiz muqaabil aa jaye
manzil ke liyay do gaam chaluN aur samaney manzil aa jaye

ay dil ki Khalish chal yuN hi sahi, chalata to huN un ki mahafil main
us waqt mujhe chaunkaa dena jab rang pe mahafil aa jaye

ay rahabar-e-kaamil chalane ko tayar to huN par yaad rahe
us waqt mujhe bhaTka dena jab samaney manzil aa jaye

haN yad mujhe tum kar lena avaz mujhe tum de lenaa
is raah-e-muhabat main koi dar paish jo mushkil aa jaye

ab kyuN DhunDhu woh chashm-e-karam hone de sitam balaa-e-sitam
main chahataa huN ai jazbaa-e-Gam mushkil pas-e-mushkil aa jaaye

is jazb-e-dil ke barey main ik mashvaraa tum se letaa huN
us waqt mujhe kya lazim hai jab tujh pe mera dil aa jaye

ay barq-e-tajali kyaa tune mujhako bhi musaa samajha hai
main tuur nahin jo jal jaauN jo chaahe muqabil aa jaye

poet: Behzad Lukanwi