haya nay laboN per haath rakhay haiN

show_sha · December 1, 2004, 4:37am

chan-chal ankhaiN,

labooN per khoobsoorat, shubnamee see muskurahat

ankhoN maiN khawboN k bay shumaar jazeeray

dil may chahat ka arman liay

aik sundar larkee!

meray dil k bund dareechay kholnay aaee hay

kuchh bolnay aaee hay

haya nay laboN per haath rakhay haiN

mager ankhaiN sabhee kuch keh rahee haiN

haaN mujh say keh rahee haiN

“mera dil tera mehram ho gaya hay”

Dynamic_fire · December 1, 2004, 2:08pm

very nice and keep writing

show_sha · December 1, 2004, 6:44pm

thnx DF

Golden_Scorpion_1 · December 2, 2004, 6:25am

Nice one …

show_sha · December 2, 2004, 8:32pm

shukariya :k:

paki_kurri_1 · December 15, 2004, 11:37pm

its great :k::k:

system · December 30, 2004, 9:23pm

Mera dil tera mehram ho gaya hai!

Nice… :k:

chodhry · December 31, 2004, 5:21am

wah wah!, I really loved the poem especially ‘title line’

‘haya nay laboN per haath rakhay haiN’

:k:

keep writing man!

show_sha · January 1, 2005, 7:22am

thnx pk :k:

show_sha · January 1, 2005, 7:26am

shukriya KN and choudhry… :k:

fizion · January 2, 2005, 7:06am

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haya nay laboN per haath rakhay haiN
mager ankhaiN sabhee kuch keh rahee haiN

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nice one!

show_sha · January 2, 2005, 7:28pm

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*Originally posted by fizion: *

nice one!
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thnx