"Hawa seeti bajati he"

KhizaaN ki balkoni say
hawa seeti bajati he

chalo chalney ka waqt aya

darakhtooN say hazarooN khushk pattey toottey haiN
our us kay sath urhtey haiN

woh shayed khud naheen urhtey…?
qazaa unko urhati he
hawa seeti baajati he
…to yeh urhtey howey pattey
gulestaaN kay kissi namehrbaaN gooshey mein torhi dair ko ruktey haiN
peeli ghaas kay us ajnabi sehraa ko taktey haiN
jo un kay …our unkay aashyaaN kay darmeyaaN, phaila howa he
our jis ki had naheen milti
khizaaN us ajnabi sehra ki hadd-e-mumkina say
unki janib dekhti he
our ik fateh ki sorat muskurati he
hawa seeti bajati he

hawa seeti bajati he to yeh ruktey howey pattey
kissi anjaan si dehshat kay dar say kapkapatey haiN
larz kar sar jhukatey haiN
gulestaaN kay kissi namehrbaaN gooshey ki pasti say unko uthati he
hawa unko utha kay shehr ki bemuddasarkooN pay lati he

Main in pattooN ko jab shehr ki sarhkooN pe bikhartey dekhta hooN
sochta hooN_____!

“Adhoorey khwaab ki sorat yeh bekal benawaa pattey
jab urhtey haiN to apney dil mein keya keya sochtey hooN gay?
safar kay zahm ka koch to madawa sochtey hooN gay?
main apney paooN say lipta ik muztarib patta uthata hooN
our us say pochhta hooN____!”
meri bateeN woh sunta he magar kochh bhi naheen kehta
bas ik zahmi nigah say meri janib dekhta he
dukh bhara chehra uthata he

achanak waqt rukta he
main us pattey kay chehrey par apna aks pata hooN
kissi anjaaN si dehshat kay dar say kapkapata hooN
meri gardan pe jaisey chhipkali si sarsarati he
fiza meiN ajnabi say dard ka kuhra ubharta he
nami si phail jati he..hawa seeti bajati he
khizaaN ki balkoni say
hawa seeti bajati he…!

“Amjad I. A”

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very nice Rameesha g …and koyal seeti bajati hia
ramesh k wapis anay per

PS: aur pata nahi ab kis kis k wapis anay per koyal ko baar baar bajana parey ghi
wohi :smack: seetiiiiiii

Re: "Hawa seeti bajati he"

nice :)

Re: “Hawa seeti bajati he”

Adhoorey khwaab ki sorat yeh bekal benawaa pattey
jab urhtey haiN to apney dil mein keya keya sochtey hooN gay?
safar kay zahm ka koch to madawa sochtey hooN gay?
main apney paooN say lipta ik muztarib patta uthata hooN
our us say pochhta hooN____!"
meri bateeN woh sunta he magar kochh bhi naheen kehta
bas ik zahmi nigah say meri janib dekhta he
dukh bhara chehra uthata he

thnkew Rameesha g for sharing this beautiful Ghazal…:flower2:

Re: "Hawa seeti bajati he"

Beautiful and nice to see you back ... :)

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thanks alot Shab-e-Hijar, reet & thanks zawanfira for the welcome :~)

wah keya baat he aaj kal ki Koyal bhi seetii bajati he, pichhley zamaney mein to sirf koyal ‘kokti’ thi .. nawazish, shukria seetiii baja kay hamarey istaqbaal ka
our ab our bhi seetiiaaN bajana shuro kar dijiye buhat sarey loog wapis aaye hain :~)

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hmmm koyal abhi taak kookti hia jesay pahlay kookti thei rameesha g sunanay main kabhi faraq lagta k kabhi tu seeti bajati hwuei lagti aur kisi ko kookti huwei hia zara ghor se sunaiey gha kabhi aur haan ..ab :smack: koyal seeti kia bajiey ghi koyal ki tu seeti gum he ho gaye itnay waday waday lokaaN ko wapis dekh k :stuck_out_tongue:

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Amazing piece of poetry by a wonderful poet… Thank you for sharing Rameesha! :slight_smile:

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Rameesha,

Nice one

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**“Adhoorey khwaab ki sorat yeh bekal benawaa pattey
jab urhtey haiN to apney dil mein keya keya sochtey hooN gay?
safar kay zahm ka koch to madawa sochtey hooN gay?
main apney paooN say lipta ik muztarib patta uthata hooN
our us say pochhta hooN____!”
meri bateeN woh sunta he magar kochh bhi naheen kehta
bas ik zahmi nigah say meri janib dekhta he
dukh bhara chehra uthata he

achanak waqt rukta he
main us pattey kay chehrey par apna aks pata hooN
kissi anjaaN si dehshat kay dar say kapkapata hooN
meri gardan pe jaisey chhipkali si sarsarati he
fiza meiN ajnabi say dard ka kuhra ubharta he
nami si phail jati he..hawa seeti bajati he
khizaaN ki balkoni say
hawa seeti bajati he…!**

Wah… Its Really Wonderful… Although Full Pome is Outstanding but End is… Marvelous.

Tnx a lot for Sharing Such a Beauty :flower1:

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buhat khhobsurat nazm hay ,i like AIA all nazms:-p thanks for sharing, copy-paste tou nahin ki thii:p