''Hawa meri saheli hai''

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 28, 2011, 8:27am

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‘‘Hawa meri saheli hai’’**

Suno!
tum meray kamray meiN
tumhaaray lams ki khushboo…
kisi guldan k hathoN mein rakh jana
ya phir tum meray takiye par
jahaaN yadoN ka aur khawaboN ka
madfan hey,
dua k phool rakh jana
suna hey …!
boltay ho tou bahaaraiN phool chunti haiN
tumhara lams pa kar tou hawa maghroor rehti hey
buhat khushboo luTati hey
suna hey…!
kehkshaaN aksar wahan pr paa’i jaati hey
jahaN par tum qadam rakho
suna hey…!
tum sakhi bhi ho
bina maangay hii lamhoN ko…
gulaabi rang detay ho
ka’ee be Noor aankhoN main
bohat sey khawab aur jugnu basatay ho
suno…!
meray liye ‘‘Tum’’
kar sako tou itna kar dena
hawa sey dosti rakhna
hawa meri saheli hai
tumhain chhuh kar jo aaye gi
bohat khushbu lutaaye gi
tou main bhi saans lay luuN gi
**koi din aur ji luuN gi…!!

****jis ne parh ke reply nai kia wuh ganja/ganji ho jae ga Inshallah **

ehsan · April 28, 2011, 8:38am

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Mein pehlay hee ganja hoon soh mujhey farq nahin parey ga, nahin parnee mujhey.

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 28, 2011, 8:43am

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parhne to pare gi warna main khavab me bure sapne ban ke aon gi

Amarbail · April 28, 2011, 10:02am

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Bahut umdaah sharing hai MM … :k:

pktun · April 28, 2011, 12:26pm

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wah g v nyc

Shab-e-Hijar · April 28, 2011, 4:30pm

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itni gehri nazam tumhay samjh agaye thi?

Shab-e-Hijar · April 28, 2011, 4:31pm

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 28, 2011, 8:49pm

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achi nazm hai Muskaan..
lekin

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 29, 2011, 7:38am

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jeeeee haaan

kia

muddii · April 29, 2011, 7:49am

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Very Nice MM:)

lethal_kamikaze · April 29, 2011, 12:47pm

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Sannan · April 29, 2011, 12:47pm

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Hawa he ho sakti hay tumharai saheeli

Amal · April 29, 2011, 1:59pm

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Yehi baat meiN bhi soch raha tha… … Lekin nazm bohat khoobsoorat hey…

3rd line meiN “tumhaarey” ki jaga ‘apney’ hona chahiye tha… check with KKM

KKF · April 29, 2011, 2:13pm

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**ab ronaa dhonaa band karo…maiN to already ganja huN magar phir bhii jawaab de rahaa huN taa k tumhaarii lan taraanii kisii taur ruke! **

UZ · April 29, 2011, 3:09pm

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MM tum masoom bhi ho Itni achi nazam kaya baat hai :k:

jiia · April 29, 2011, 3:34pm

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MM:smilestar:yi kha k ab tum b ganji ho jao gi

jiia · April 29, 2011, 3:37pm

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ghor say partay to sahe,itni peare nzm hy

GANJAY honay k dar say aa gae ho ap:omg:

Aryaan · May 1, 2011, 10:25am

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Nice One Muskaan..:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 1, 2011, 1:20pm

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mujhe u se ziada urdu ati

lethal_kamikaze · May 1, 2011, 1:34pm

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Last line kiya hy?