Hey ri teri kia oqaat!
Doodh pilane wale janwaron main
ae sab se kam oqaat
Pursh ki pasli se to tera janm hua
aur hamesha tu peron main pehni gai
Jab maa jaya phulwari main titli hota
Tere phool se hathon main
Tere qad se badi jhadoo hoti
Maa ka aanchal pakde pakde
Tujh ko kitne kaam aa jate
Uplay thaapna, lakdi katna
Gae ki saani banana
Phir bhi… Makhan ki tikya
Maa ne hamesha bhaya ki roti pe rakhi
Tere liye bas raat ki roti
Raat ka salan
Rookhi sookhi khake
Mota jhoota pehnte
Tujh pe jawani aai to
Tere baap ki nafrat tujh se aur badhi
Tere uthne bethne, chalne phirne per
Aisi kadi nazar rakhi
Jaise zara si chook hui
aur tu bhaag gai
Solhwaan saal lagte hi
ek mard ne apne mann ka bojh
dosre mard ke tann per utaar dia
Bus ghar aur maalik badla
Teri chaakri wohi rahi
Balke kuch aur ziada
Ab tere zimme shamil tha
Roti khilane wale ko
Raat gae khush bhi karna
Aur har sawan gabhan hona
Puray dino se ghar ka kaam sanbhalti
Pati ka sath bus bister tak
Aage tera kaam!
Kaisi nokri hai
Jis main koi dehari nahin
Jis main koi chhuti nahi
Jis main alag hojane ki, sirray se koi reet hi nahin
DhoroN DangroN ko bhi
Jeth Asaarh ki dhoop main
Peid tale sustane ki azadi hoti hai
Tere bhaag main aisa koi samay nahin
Tere jeewan pagdandi per koi peid nahin hai
Hey ri!
Kin karmon ka phal hai tu
Tann bechay to kasbi thehre
Mann ka soda kare aur patni kehlae
Samay ke hathon hota rahe ga
Kab tak ye apmaan
Ek niwala roti
Ek katore pani ki khatir
Deti rahegi kab tak tu baleedan!
Nazm : Basheeray ki ghar wali
Poet: Parveen Shaikr
Book : Inkaar
Aap ka ishara Hindi alfaz ki taraf hai shayad. Mere khayal se agar iss nazm main Arabic ya Persian alfaz ka istemal iss ki khoobsurti ko khatam kar deta.
Aap ka ishara Hindi alfaz ki taraf hai shayad. Mere khayal se agar iss nazm main Arabic ya Persian alfaz ka istemal iss ki khoobsurti ko khatam kar deta.
For example agar woh "adam" likh detein to khuch bhi nahi bigarta bas yehi lafz pasand nahi aaya poori nazm mein
Pursh ki pasli se to tera janm hua
aur hamesha tu peron main pehni gai
**Adam ki pasli sey tera janam hua
**And waisay bhi yeh meray taste ki ghazal nahi shayad :( Ladies ko bohat mazloon kahaa gaya hai which is true to some extent but I think and I believe hamaray relgion mein ladies ko jitni respect di gaii hai woh kaheen bhi nahi isi liye Hazrat Hawwa to kabhi mazloom nahi theen. Rest culture hai and bad things happen in culture.
Boht Khoobsuart tajzia farmaya aap ne. Parveen Shakir must have admired that.
Asal main yeh Nazm jis tabqe ki akkasi karti hai, wo tabqa mazhab se ziada rasoomat main jakda hua hai.. iss liye Parveen Shakir ne uss tabqe ki zaban main ye Nazm kahi hai.
Good to know that a lady accepted that ladies have spread propaganda about males and last but not the least Hazrat Hawwa iss waja se mazloom nhain thi kiyunke unki koi saas ya nand nahi thi
I didn’t say propaganda but yeah ladies nay nakhray to utthanay hotay ahin naa Hazrat Hawwa saas nand honay ke bawajood bhi mazloom nahi theen woh nabi ki wife theen
Konsa drama hai? Wo to nahin jis main khwateen ye shiyat karti hain " Janu aap mujhe bilkul time nahin dete.. Kal 24 ghanton main se aap puray 30 minute mujhse dur rahe’.
Kashmeer ki azadi tak, aur Zardari ki mot tak hamare ghar main 'star plus ’ band hai. yeh uss ghamnak dor ki yaden hai jab hamare jamhoori remote controller ko ghasibana tor per qabze main le lia gaya tha.
Ittna basheeray key bivi ko afsoos naheen jitna Parveen Sahiba ko hay 
you know Basheeeray ki bivi
and last but not the least Hazrat Hawwa iss waja se mazloom nhain thi kiyunke unki koi saas ya nand nahi thi 
Hazrat Hawwa saas nand honay ke bawajood bhi mazloom nahi theen 
woh nabi ki wife theen
kaya drama hai life 1 bhi 