Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Hatim_Jawed · November 18, 2011, 8:28am

Mohabbat dosti ghairat deyanat chheen leti hai |na jaane aur bhi kya kya seyasat chheen leti hai ||mere khwabo’n ko taabeere’n mayassar ho’n to kaisey ho’n ?meri saari kamaai to zaroorat chheen leti hai ||naee tahzeeb ke deewaano’n ko ye kaun samjhaae ?zara si bhonl bhi purkho’n ki izzat chheen leti hai ||dupatta sar pe rakh leney mein aakhir harj hi kya hai ?numaaish husn ki kitno’n ki asmat chheen leti hai ||gila kaanto’n se kya zulmo-sitam to unki fitrat hai |gulo’n ki berukhi jeene ki chaahat chheen leti hai ||kabhi paao’n taley se khee’nch leti hai zamee’n zalim |kabhi ye zindgi ‘Jawed’ se chhat chheen leti hai || —Hatim Jawed

Naabigh · November 18, 2011, 9:30am

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Ajeeb hai yea Khambkhat GS ki Screen
Space Bar use karne ki Ijazat chheen Layte hai

:@:

Shazia_Arif · November 18, 2011, 6:26pm

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meri sari qamai tu zarurat cheen leti hai...bohat alaa per paen agar is ko poetic style main likh dete tu or maza a jana tha:s

sfaseehrabbani · November 19, 2011, 4:52pm

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بہت خوب

Innocent_Smile · November 20, 2011, 8:16pm

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Boht Khob Hatim Jawed :k:

abroad

likhty rahiye aur share karty rahiye

Hatim_Jawed · December 14, 2011, 5:41pm

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bahot-bahot shukriya fseeh bhai.

Hatim_Jawed · December 14, 2011, 6:06pm

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hausla-afzai ka bahot-bahot shukriya shazia Arif sahiba!:k:

Hatim_Jawed · December 14, 2011, 6:27pm

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Naacheez ki himmat-afzaai ka bahot-bahot shukriya janab !:k:

Hatim_Jawed · December 14, 2011, 6:36pm

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SHUKRIYA Janab! ummeed hai aagey bhi rahnumaai karte rahengey.

Hatim_Jawed · December 27, 2011, 5:48pm

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Betiya'n sasuraal betey kaam par baahar gaye |
De ke boorhey baap ko tanhaai ki chaadar gaye ||

Mar chuki thi laadli beti dawao'n ke baghair |
Bech kar apna lahoo jab tak palat kar ghar gaye ||

Kaarkhaney hum se zinda hum watan ki jaan hain |
Hum ne hi ghalla ugaya hum hi bhookey mar gaye ||
thi yahi uski khata wo hoobsoorat thi bahot |
Chaak daaman uski ismat ka darindey kar gaye ||

iss qadar JAWED khasta ho chuki hai chhat meri |
Naam baarish ka suna to mere bachchey dar gaye ||

[HR][/HR] ---Hatim Jawed.

sfaseehrabbani · December 29, 2011, 4:13am

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بہت اچھی غزل ہے حاتم بھائی

داد قبول کیجیے

sfaseehrabbani · December 29, 2011, 4:18am

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ہر غزل یا نظم کے لیے الگ تھریڈ لگایا کیجیے۔

آپ کا بہت شکریہ