hasil

[shab-e-firaq]

kiya kahyine
kiya hasil kiya adhori muhabat say
bas itna dilasa hai
jatyie jatyie woh harjaie
hasraton ko
lafzon main dhalna sikha giya

[S.786]

Re: hasil

buhut khoob

[Shab-e-Hijar]

bohat khoob :k:

[abeeha]

thought is good but lag nahi raha k ye sher hy…rhythm hi nhi hy…

[rabiee]

Re: hasil

niceee