Hasb-e-Zaeqa

Dear freinds
Apna likha huwa koi bhi sheir jo kisi bhi waja sey aap ko khud bohat pasand ho, wo aap is thread meiN hum sab ke saath share kar saktey heiN. Aap mukhtasran bayaan bhi kar saktey heiN ke koi khaas sheir aap ko kis leeye pasand hey. Bara-e-meharbaani poori ghazal post mat kijeeye, ziaada sey ziaada 2 aashaar. Aur nazm yahaN post mat kijeeye ga.

Shukriya :slight_smile:


Maot ney shaaed behka dia tha lehroN ko warna
doobney waaloN ki samandar sey barri yaari thi

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oh i thought there is sum thing "yummy"from Amal's kitchen when i saw title :p
nice sher Aymal.....kia hum ne post kar saktey apni pasand ka sher :(

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I know it looks a bit funny :~) But it does relate to the idea, if you see it in right perspective :) By the way, aap Intikhaab meiN kiuN nahi try karti yehi idea? And thanx for liking the sheir :)

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Mazahiy a shyr kh sakty hain yhan ky Nahi:confused:

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Bhai Amal Marhaba! Kya tarah nikaali aapne! "Huzoor e Shah mein sher o sukhan ki aazmaaish hai!"

Meri bohat saalon pehle kahi hui ghazal ke do sher jo aaj bhi mujhe pasand hain:-

Ghamkhaane mein ishrat ke saamaan hue hotey!
Do din jo mere ghar tum mehmaan hue hotey!

Eisaai, Yahoodi ho, Hindu ho, Musalmaan ho!
Ae ahl e jahaan tum kuchh, insaan hue hotey!

Shukriya!

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Umer-e-rawaaN kay saathi raqeeb Thehray
YouN Apnay AaNgun kay hum Ajnabi Thehray

Mitti kay gharoNday saahil par banaanay waalay
Woh haath aaj taa'meer-e-Qadar kay Mujaddid Thehray

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Mainy mehsoos kia hay us Ahsas-e-karab ko

Dam-e-marg pey zindgee ki jub koi khuwahish keray

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^ Bohat khoob Problem_girl

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MeiN uski sookhi hui aaNkhoN pe kya yaqeeN karta
meiN ney ttehrey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar deikhey heiN
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** mene jis bat ko kenay main ik ummer bita dee**

** us ko jhutlanay main ussay bus ik lamha laga**

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Problem girl :k: very nice shers by your side:-)

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^ Thanx

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HazaaroN rat'jagoN ke baad bhi kisi jazaa ki jagaa

meiN ney chaaha bhi to bas itna ke tujhey phir sey deikhooN

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**Ye hasrateiN ye khaahisheiN, ye aarzu ye justuju

yuN sochney ko beitthye to zindagi meiN kya nahi**

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^ Very nice Amal :-)
Hmm mera apna fav ....

Aa jao keh ab tou aankh bhi nam ho chali hay
chalay bhi aao ab keh bahaar bhi kam ho chali hay
har ik aahat pey lagtaa hay keh tum aa rahey ho
gulshan me hota he guman tera aur gul mein teri yad pali hay

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*Nayya Sooraj Meray Aangan Main Her Subh Ko Uterta Hay
Chamakta Hay, Magar Umeed Ki Kirnain Nahi Daita
*

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Thanx Gul:flower1: … Nice one fara :k:

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Tujhey kis dard ki shiddat merey dar pey kheiNch laai
tujhey kis ney keh dia tha merey paas har dawaa hey
koi gila nahi hey tujh sey merey khaloos meiN hi ‘kami’ hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha usey laga ke wo khuda hey

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arz hey,

iss keye bais, kandeel, mehwer hey zindagi kee rooshanasaiyan
hein zarroor magar ba-hosh, pusaroor, saluk-ulfat kee sergoshiyan

azaim kee inn keye, latalukee ka asr hey beyshuk
fakat ginwana nahee ata hey hamein hisab-e-haq

dushwari

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Dhanak ke rang fiza meiN jab bikhartey heiN to lagta hey

hawa pe likh kar naam koi yaad kisi ko karta hey

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*Yeh aur baat kay milna nahi hay mumkin abhi
Magar Kabhi na milo zeest main, Aisa bhee nahi
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Zabardast Ghazal hay :-)