~.~Haroofe Yaar~.~

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 20, 2005, 7:41am

~.~Haroofe Yaar~.~

Jo teray naam ke harfooN ko dekhta hooN kabhi
Ajeeb lazate Gham ka shikaar hota hooN
MaiN jaanta hi naheeN kiuN hay meri Ye halat
Issi talaasho Tajassus maiN khoya rahta hooN
Suna hay loag jissay sab se pyara rakhtay haiN
Har aik Naqsh maiN usko Tarashtay haiN wo
**Wo maahtaab ko chehra-e-Yaar kehtay haiN **
Har ikk kali maiN labe yaar dekhtay haiN wo
Tou kia waja hay ke maiN beqarar rehat hooN
Jo teray naam ke harfooN ko dekhta hooN kabhi
Khirad ne dil se kai baar ye shikayat ki
Suni kabhi na meri baat aye dile nadaaN
Ye kia ke aaj Khirad ne kaha tou jalta hay
Dile nadaaN bhi kehta hay Jhulasta hooN maiN
Yahi haroof tou mujh ko Raqeeb lagtay haiN
yahi mazaaq mera har ghaRi uRatay haiN
Mera tou koi bhi taaluq na ban saka Tujh se
UnhaiN maqam hay Hasil wo teray apnay haiN
**Issi liye kabhi shayad jo Dekhta hooN unhaiN **
Ajeeb Lazate Gham ka Shikaar hota hooN…!
(Golden Scorpion)

naina_wali · March 20, 2005, 7:55am

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beautiful..loved it!

P.S. thankyou!:-)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 20, 2005, 8:47am

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You are MOST welcome Dearest

Tnx for Loviing it

Black_Mamba · March 20, 2005, 9:53am

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a very good poem. The theme is the best part of it. and Also its in a good rythm.

Keep it up. :k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 20, 2005, 11:33am

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Tnx BM… I will Try to Keep it Up… JO ke Mushkil hay

Koyal · March 20, 2005, 2:58pm

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Tou kia waja hay ke maiN beqarar rehat hooN
Jo teray naam ke harfooN ko dekhta hooN kabhi

nice one golden n=baji :)

Amal · March 20, 2005, 9:19pm

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Golden bhai, kya golden baat keh di hey aap ney:):k:…waah…bohat zabardast likha hey…hope to see more of you and thanx for sharing with us:)

ASA · March 21, 2005, 4:26am

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Wah… kya kehnay … bouhat he achay :k:

Lamhay · March 21, 2005, 6:40pm

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wah ...... amazing ........Sunehra bichuu Tussi tu chuppay Rustam nikalay ...

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 22, 2005, 4:11am

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Shukria, Nawazish… Koyal MamooN

Amal… Yaar Pooray teen maheeenay baad Nazil hui hay Hum tou aap jesay Rawani ke saath naheeN likh saktay na… Buhut Ahista Ahista amad hoti hay…
Pasandeedgi ka Shukria…

AsSweetAs… Tanks to u as well

Lamhay Dear… Tumhari Yaddasht ko Theek karnay ke liye… Hakeem Jaleenos se kushta lena paRayga… Remember… Mera naam Rustam naheN hay

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 22, 2005, 9:53pm

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Lo aap bhi likhtay hain,kya baat hay janab, very nice poem, aur jab bhi naazil huwi yahan share karna nahin bhoolna:-)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 23, 2005, 4:04am

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Wat do U mean ke… U never read my Poem… I mean iss se pehlay…

Kam az kam… 5 or 6 Poems to Post kar chuka honga…
I know.. no enough.. but… Something is better na

BTW… Thanks for Appreciation…

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 23, 2005, 12:35pm

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nahi ,time nahin thaa aur koi nazar sey guzri bhi nahin
chuuhpa kay post ki thii shaaid :~)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 24, 2005, 4:35am

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Jee naheeN hum ne tou Ba Bange Dahal Post kee theeN… but… ab kissi ko Nazar na aye tou kia karaiN

Dilsay · April 3, 2005, 11:55pm

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Simply wonderful......

Khush rahoo

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 4, 2005, 5:10am

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/\ Shukria Janab...

Muskuratay Rahiye... and... Aatay Rahiye..... Ghayab ho jatay haiN... and.. phir Nazar naheeN atay :D

Nazi83 · April 4, 2005, 5:23pm

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W@h janab!!!
lafzuon ku buhat khobsorti sey ikhata kya hia GS apney !! thx for sharing

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 5, 2005, 4:37am

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Thanks Nazo.. :)

system · April 6, 2005, 6:13pm

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Waah.. GS bhai.. bahut achey! :-)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 7, 2005, 6:12am

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Thanks Sweety :)