ab tak to noor-o-nik’hat-o-rang-o-sada kahun
mein tujko chuu sakun to khuda-jaanay kya kahun
lafzon se unko pyar hai, mafhoom se mujhay
wo gul kahein jisay, mein tera naqsh-e-pa kahun
kya jabr hai k but ko bhi kehna paray khuda
wo hai khuda to mere khuda tujko kya kahun
jab mere munh mein meri zuban hai to kyon na mein
jo kuch kahun, yaqeen se kahun, barmala kahun
kya jaanay kis safar pay rawan hun azal say mein
har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
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mukarer, aabla paa.
very nice poem.
best,
Dushwari
inspired these spontaneous lines
mumkin na sahi, jo seb tha hona
na huva tow ja ba ja, iss ka huva kahun
afaak kee kurbet heye zameen ko
itni shidet, goya zameen kee uraan kahun...
ilfaaz hein jirah apni
sotch ko kamoshee ka imtihaan kahun
mekhsoos aik rah-guzr ka pata heye, jeb hee
bey sabeb manziloon ko kyoon apna makan kahun?
tasavur kee senjeeda meh heye tujheye lebreize
khood saaf dhikheye, per iseye chupa kahun
woh sirf aik roshn huvee azl kee see berkarar tapish
munjeamid nafs, umdteye berfeeleye saraab kahun...
mooret aur sooret dono waket kee leh per jhoomteye
yeye dilfareibee, dunya keye honeye ka nishan kahun
tedbeer kee kabil aik deiree, rukh keye atraaf deikhna
tu betaa deye, aye dil, haan kahoon ya phir na kahun?
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[QUOTE]
mumkin na sahi, jo seb tha hona
na huva tow ja ba ja, iss ka huva kahun
afaak kee kurbet heye zameen ko
itni shidet, goya zameen kee uraan kahun...
ilfaaz hein jirah apni
sotch ko kamoshee ka imtihaan kahun
mekhsoos aik rah-guzr ka pata heye, jeb hee
bey sabeb manziloon ko kyoon apna makan kahun?
tasavur kee senjeeda meh heye tujheye lebreize
khood saaf dhikheye, per iseye chupa kahun
woh sirf aik roshn huvee azl kee see berkarar tapish
munjeamid nafs, umdteye berfeeleye saraab kahun...
mooret aur sooret dono waket kee leh per jhoomteye
yeye dilfareibee, dunya keye honeye ka nishan kahun
tedbeer kee kabil aik deiree, rukh keye atraaf deikhna
tu betaa deye, aye dil, haan kahoon ya phir na kahun?
[/QUOTE]
WoW Dushwari jee. Nice Job. Lot of creativity in that. :)
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
thanks, aabla pa :>
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
what a formidable team u two- maza aa gaya! :k:
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Really! 
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
bohat khoob :k:
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
very nice sharing abla g n nice effort dushwaree g
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
zabardast sharing ablapa n dush :k:
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
everybody, credit goes to aabla paa for inspiring to write from the original poem. thanks,
Dushwari
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
Behar aur kaafiya aur radeef teeno mein jaan hai maza aya parh kar :k:
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
thanku shab n munchu n bheegi n lonely :)
Re: har inteha ko aik naee ibteda kahun
Bohat khoob aabla_pa..