har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

Koyal · September 30, 2004, 3:21pm

* udaas kaaGazi mausam meiN rang-o-buu rakh de har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

zabaan-e-gul se chaTTaa’naiN taraashane vaale
sukuut-e-naqsh meiN aaraa_ish-e-namuu rakh de

chalaa hai jaanib-e-maiKhaanaa aaj phir vaa_iz
kahiN na jaam pe lab apane bevazuu rakh de

Khudaa kare meraa munsif sazaa sunaane meiN
meraa hii sar mere qaatil ke ruu-ba-ruu rakh de

samandaroN ne bulaayaa hai tujh ko ai ‘Bekal’
tuu apanii pyaas kii saharaa meiN aabaruu rakh de*

Maheen2002 · September 30, 2004, 3:26pm

Very nice

Saqi_the_angel · September 30, 2004, 4:18pm

Re: har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

Khudaa kare meraa munsif sazaa sunaane meiN
meraa hii sar mere qaatil ke ruu-ba-ruu rakh de
*
[/QUOTE]

Nice one.

Thanks for sharing

Saqi

Pramod · September 30, 2004, 5:34pm

** Koyal ** yuN hii aik nanhii sii jaan hoti hai..ooska lahu gar har phuul ke lab par rakheNge to mar jaaegii , bechaarii.....KyoN ?
ha.ha.ha...
joke a part..once again a beautiful ghazal from your great choice....

Thanks a lot ** Koyal **

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 30, 2004, 5:59pm

Boht khoob koyal:)

Minerva · September 30, 2004, 9:20pm

very nice Koyal :)

Daagh · October 3, 2004, 12:12am

very beautiful Koyal jee

:)

samandaroN ne bulaayaa hai tujh ko ai 'Bekal'
tuu apanii pyaas kii saharaa meiN aabaruu rakh de

BanJaraa · October 3, 2004, 1:36am

Bouhat khoob…

as ever aap ka intekhaab beautyfullllllll hai

Koyal bibi aap ne abhi thak meri ik adhna sii koshish (Fasiley) ko aapni nazar-e-khas ka sharf nahin baksha. agar waqt mile tou …Sho’ra-e-Gupshup main ja ke ik nazar dekh lena…

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:18pm

thanks maheen ..

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:20pm

Re: Re: har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *

Nice one.

Thanks for sharing

Saqi
[/QUOTE]

thanks...:)

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:22pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pramod: *
* Koyal ** yuN hii aik nanhii sii jaan hoti hai..ooska lahu gar har phuul ke lab par rakheNge to mar jaaegii , bechaarii.....KyoN ?
ha.ha.ha...
joke a part..once again a beautiful ghazal from your great choice....

Thanks a lot ** Koyal **
[/QUOTE]

uff koyal k leay itni hamdardi ye koyal strong wali koyal hia na fiker nat phool phool pe gir k be thora lahu bach he jana hia :D

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:23pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
Boht khoob koyal:)
[/QUOTE]

thanku heacker:)

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:26pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Minerva: *
very nice Koyal :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks MODE lagta hia ap aj achay mood main hain tabi koyal b nazar a gaye ..:)

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:27pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Daagh: *
very beautiful Koyal jee

:)

samandaroN ne bulaayaa hai tujh ko ai 'Bekal'
tuu apanii pyaas kii saharaa meiN aabaruu rakh de
[/QUOTE]

wo ghar aien hamarey khuda ki qudrat
kabhi hum un ko kabhi apni gazla ko dekhtey haiN

:p

Koyal · October 3, 2004, 1:36pm

thanks banjara..

system · October 3, 2004, 4:10pm

beautiful :k:

Koyal · October 5, 2004, 2:50am

thanks..

show_sha · October 5, 2004, 4:54am

very nice :)

WiseGuy · October 5, 2004, 7:01pm

Re: har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

udaas kaaGazi mausam meiN rang-o-buu rakh de
har ek phuul ke lab pe meraa lahuu rakh de

zabaan-e-gul se chaTTaa'naiN taraashane vaale
sukuut-e-naqsh meiN aaraa_ish-e-namuu rakh de

chalaa hai jaanib-e-maiKhaanaa aaj phir vaa_iz
kahiN na jaam pe lab apane bevazuu rakh de

Khudaa kare meraa munsif sazaa sunaane meiN
meraa hii sar mere qaatil ke ruu-ba-ruu rakh de

samandaroN ne bulaayaa hai tujh ko ai 'Bekal'
tuu apanii pyaas kii saharaa meiN aabaruu rakh de
[/QUOTE]

Kh00b :)