Haqeeqat
Na Aadhee Hon Na Poree Hon
Meray Humdum Haqeqat Hai
Mein Teray Bin Adhoree Hon
zaroor bataiay ga app sab ko kaisee lagee poem???
Haqeeqat
Na Aadhee Hon Na Poree Hon
Meray Humdum Haqeqat Hai
Mein Teray Bin Adhoree Hon
zaroor bataiay ga app sab ko kaisee lagee poem???
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Sonia_jee.. its really very sweet and beautiful, yet very simple.. ![]()
Mujhe ye aik sher yaad agaya..
Meri Takmeel Tum Se Thee Shayad
Na-Mukammil Si Zaat Lagti Hai
Very well Done.. :k:
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short and simple yet complete in its meaning… ![]()
laikin yeh kitnaY sher haiN :D?
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thank u Ahmer…![]()
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AQ bhai its a Haiku…![]()
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It is very, sweat soniaa-_jee…bohat tthorrey sey alfaaz meiN bohat barri baat bohat aasaani sey keh di aap ney. Great :k: Keep it up and keep sharing your work with us ![]()
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ap likhtee bhi ho kya baat hai
keep it up ![]()
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khoob
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Haqeeqat
Na Aadhee Hon Na Poree Hon
Meray Humdum Haqeqat Hai
Mein Teray Bin Adhoree Hon
The Truth
not half, not full
but dear love, I must tell:
without you, I am un-
fulfilled
Please tell more truths
and tell with your heart,
not like an imitator here *
*who calls himself a *
*poetry *Ustaad*
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Mukhtasir or Pur asar:clap: