system
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hamaray Din rat roshan hoa kertay thay
rukhsaron per gulab mehka kertay thay
**In ansoon say bharee Ankhoon main **
**Kabhi Jugnoo Chamka kertay thay **
**yeh jo Jamid say hain lub mere **
**Kabhi geet sunaya kertay thay **
**ab Zkhumkhurda sa ha Dil mera **
rung zindgee k is main dherka kertay thay
ajnabi bun ker jo qareeb say guzray hain
kabhi shreek-e-haal mere hoa kertay thay
**Beech Tofan main yeh chor janay walay **
**HAmna , mere Rahbar hoa kertay thay **
nakhan
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Re: Hamna,z poetry
wah wah,
hamna ji kiya aap apnay puranay nick k baray main kuch batain gi, wo kiya hoa?
system
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Re: Hamna,z poetry
thanx for liking
mere yehe pehla or akhre nick hay ....ager kabhi change kia to announce ker doon gee .
mujh say kisi or nay bhi yhe poocha tha ..
aisee kia bat hay mere nick main?
nakhan
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Re: Hamna,z poetry
^^ chaloo maan laytay hain,
leave it...
system
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Re: Hamna,z poetry
na bhi manin to kia ho jaye ga ...?
ok left
Re: Hamna,z poetry
*yeh jo Jamid say hain lub mere *
*Kabhi geet sunaya kertay thay *
jamid ke kya mayini hain?
Re: Hamna,z poetry
is ka matlab hay munjamind.. yaani kah saaqit ... yaani kay jis main junbish na ho harkat na ho :)