Hamein alwida kehte hoay...

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 5, 2003, 1:23pm

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hamein alwida kehte ho-ay
hamein choor k jate ho-ay

wo shaks ghumgeen boht tha
hamara bhee dil be-chain boht tha

sawal tu boht thay us k pas
per ilfaz nahi thay mere pas

lub pe atay atay hamari kuch batein reh gayeen
kuch soch k un kahi kuch khwaishein reh gayeen

bhool hoee hum se hum usay jaan gaay
na chahte hoay bhee pehchaan gay

kaam ab aasaan nahi usse bhulanay ka
seekh gaya hai wo hunr rulanay ka

ghar ker gaya hai ab wo meri dua-oun mein
alwida keh gaya ik ajnabi beech rahoon mein** *

Nazam · September 5, 2003, 4:10pm

Re: Hamein alwida kehte hoay…

O ma God Heart bahot zabardust

ap ki ye Ghazal parh kar besakhta dil keh utha Lajwab

MANAN · September 5, 2003, 4:33pm

very good 10/10 Really great thanxs for sharing :k:

Amarbail1 · September 5, 2003, 5:57pm

Awesome selection …:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 5, 2003, 6:42pm

Re: Re: Hamein alwida kehte hoay…

awwwwww thanks alot sis for liking

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 5, 2003, 6:44pm

thanks Manan bhai

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 5, 2003, 6:45pm

thanks

Muslim_Queen · September 5, 2003, 10:20pm

very nice.

SuraJ · September 6, 2003, 4:47am

ghar ker gaya hai ab wo meri dua-oun mein
alwida keh gaya ik ajnabi beech rahoon mein

zabardast !

Lamhay · September 6, 2003, 6:41am

bahut khoob amazing stuff HH got a gr8 choice thanks for sharing!

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 6, 2003, 3:03pm

Thanks Lamhay, Suraj and MQ

Daagh · September 6, 2003, 3:21pm

very beautiful HH :)

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bhool hoee hum se hum usay jaan gaay
na chahte hoay bhee pehchaan gay

kaam ab aasaan nahi usse bhulanay ka
seekh gaya hai wo hunr rulanay ka

ghar ker gaya hai ab wo meri dua-oun mein
alwida keh gaya ik ajnabi beech rahoon mein
**

so true...:(

bachchi aap humesha itni sad poem hi kyon post karti ho :(

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 6, 2003, 6:11pm

thanks for liking Daagho uncle

ummm sad poems hee parhti hoon wohi note kerti hoon is liye

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 7, 2003, 4:53am

zaber10:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 7, 2003, 6:47pm

thanks GKK :)

_Passionate · September 7, 2003, 6:49pm

zabardast...

Daagh · September 7, 2003, 6:52pm

to aisi poems padhna kam kare na and doosre waale bhi read kare

but they are all nice

Diva · September 9, 2003, 1:24pm

Wow nice ....Keep it up

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 9, 2003, 6:48pm

daagho uncle parhti tu mae sari hee hoon but mujhe sad ghazals ziada achi lagti hain na

thanks for liking

Passo and beenish thanks